Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并且注意时态和单复数形式。

예시: I like geography because I studied it for three years in junior high school. During that time, I learned about outer space and how the Earth was formed. I find these topics very interesting and fascinating.

제안: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I think geography is very useful. For example, we often check the weather app to decide what to wear or whether to take an umbrella. Moreover, geography helps predict and prevent natural disasters.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子衔接不够自然。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I have learned geography for three years in senior high school. Although my major at university is different, I still follow news about geography and natural disasters.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用正确的词汇。

예시: To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher because it is a big responsibility. Teachers not only teach knowledge but also help students develop good values.

제안: 回答不够连贯，重复词语较多，表达不清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，并清楚说明原因。

예시: I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries, but since I need to focus on my pharmacy major, I have limited time to do so.

× Yes, I like geographies.

✓ Yes, I like geography.

这里的“geography”是不可数名词，表示学科，不用复数形式。

× One of my major in junior high school is is geography and I gain the basic knowledge from my from three years learning about the outer space and the formulation of the world.

✓ One of my majors in junior high school was geography and I gained basic knowledge from three years of learning about outer space and the formation of the world.

“major”应使用复数形式“majors”，因为是“one of”的结构；“is is”重复，应改为“was”表示过去时；“gain”应改为过去式“gained”；“from my from three years learning”结构混乱，应改为“from three years of learning”；“formulation”应为“formation”。

× I feel is quite interesting and innovate and charming.

✓ I feel it is quite interesting, innovative, and charming.

缺少主语“it”；“innovate”应为形容词“innovative”；形容词之间用逗号分隔。

× For example, in daily life we need to use weather the app to check our outfits every day and if we need to take an umbrella with us.

✓ For example, in daily life we need to use the weather app to check our outfits every day and see if we need to take an umbrella with us.

“weather the app”词序错误，应为“the weather app”；句子缺少谓语“see”。

× And the geography has an has an important role in predicting and avoid natural disasters.

✓ And geography has an important role in predicting and avoiding natural disasters.

“the geography”中“geography”作为学科名词通常不加冠词；“has an has an”重复，应删去；“avoid”应改为动名词“avoiding”。

× Yes, I learned.

✓ Yes, I have learned.

回答“Have you ever learned geography?”时，使用现在完成时“have learned”更合适，表示经历。

× I have learned geography for three years in Senior High School.

✓ I have learned geography for three years in Senior High School.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Well, even in the university.

✓ Well, even at university.

“in the university”应改为“at university”，表示在大学期间。

× My major is not geography, but I still pay attention to the news about geography and the natural disasters.

✓ My major is not geography, but I still pay attention to news about geography and natural disasters.

“the news”通常不加冠词；“the natural disasters”改为“natural disasters”，泛指自然灾害。

× To be honest, I don't want to be any teacher because I think as a teacher you need to have a high responsibility to of the society and also the student is not only just teaching the knowledge but also to culturate students virtual.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher because I think as a teacher you need to have a high responsibility to society and also the student is not only just teaching knowledge but also cultivating students' virtues.

“any teacher”应为“a teacher”；“responsibility to of the society”结构错误，应为“responsibility to society”；“culturate”应为“cultivate”；“students virtual”应为“students' virtues”。

× Well, I think I have this opportunity to learn more about geography of other countries because I have to be, I have to be focused on my own major about the pharmacy.

✓ Well, I think I have the opportunity to learn more about the geography of other countries because I have to focus on my own major, pharmacy.

“this opportunity”改为“the opportunity”更自然；“geography of other countries”前加定冠词“the”；“have to be focused on”改为“have to focus on”；“about the pharmacy”改为“pharmacy”。

× So my, my, my attention is limited. So.

✓ So my attention is limited.

重复“my”应去除；句尾“so”多余。