Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more structured and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'just'. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. For instance, explain why you like geography and how it interests you.

예시: I like geography because it helps me understand how different places are connected around the world. For example, I often look at maps to see where my friends live and learn about their countries.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your point more effectively.

예시: Definitely, geography is useful because it shows how different countries and cultures are connected. For instance, understanding geography helps us see how climate affects trade and travel.

제안: Good answer but try to use more natural phrasing and avoid awkward expressions like 'by which we understand'. Also, add linking words to make your answer smoother.

예시: Yes, I learned geography at school, where we studied topics like climate change and the different continents and countries around the world.

제안: Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'. Make your answer more concise and clear by using proper sentence structures and linking words to express your thoughts logically.

예시: I don't want to be a geography teacher right now because I need to learn more about the subject. However, in the future, if I understand it better, I might consider teaching it.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, try to be more specific about how you learn and why it is helpful.

예시: Definitely, I enjoy learning about the geography of other countries through social media. This helps me increase my knowledge about different continents and cultures, which is useful when I visit new places.

× I like it, uh, since it is a way to look how everything is situated in the world.

✓ I like it, uh, since it is a way to look at how everything is situated in the world.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to observing or examining something. Omitting 'at' is a preposition error (ID 11). Adding 'at' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I just look different places from where I know people, so that's all.

✓ I just look at different places where I know people, so that's all.

The verb 'look' needs the preposition 'at' before the object. Also, 'from where I know people' is incorrect; it should be 'where I know people' to indicate locations. This is an incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× we used to have a geography subject by which we understand about all the climate changes and about different continents and places of the world.

✓ we used to have a geography subject through which we learned about all the climate changes and about different continents and places of the world.

The phrase 'by which we understand' is incorrect; 'through which we learned' fits better to express past learning. Also, 'understand about' is incorrect; 'learned about' is appropriate. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× But, uh, in future maybe if I will understand it in a better way.

✓ But, uh, in the future maybe if I understand it in a better way.

In English, after 'if' clauses, we use present tense to talk about future possibilities, not 'will'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future'. This is a future tense issue (ID 7) and article error (ID 22).

× So at that time I will think about to be a geographic teacher, but right now I'm not in a position to, umm, teach that.

✓ So at that time I will think about being a geography teacher, but right now I'm not in a position to, umm, teach that.

The phrase 'think about to be' is incorrect; it should be 'think about being'. Also, 'geographic teacher' should be 'geography teacher'. This is incorrect verb + -ing form (ID 8) and incorrect adjective use (ID 13).

× I don't think I can be a geography teacher because I don't know much about geography.

✓ I don't think I could be a geography teacher because I don't know much about geography.

Using 'could' expresses a more tentative or hypothetical ability, which fits better here. 'Can' implies present ability, but the context is more about possibility. This is a modal verb usage issue (ID 4).

× it uh, increase your knowledge about different continents and different countries.

✓ it uh, increases your knowledge about different continents and different countries.

The verb 'increase' should be in third person singular present tense 'increases' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a third person singular issue (ID 2).

× And even if you are at certain place, you, you should know.

✓ And even if you are at a certain place, you should know.

The phrase 'at certain place' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'certain place'. Also, the repeated 'you' is unnecessary. This is an article error (ID 22) and sentence structure error (ID 26).