Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding repetition. Also, focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details without redundancy.

예시: I have always been fascinated by geography. When I was in middle school, I consistently got the highest scores in geography exams, which made me very proud.

제안: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use clear and specific examples to explain why geography is useful. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life. For example, when we travel, understanding the local weather and culture helps us prepare better and enjoy our trip more.

제안: Try to speak more fluently and complete your sentences. Provide a clear and concise answer with relevant details, avoiding unnecessary hesitation.

예시: Yes, I learned geography from primary school until I graduated from senior school. However, I did not choose to study it at university.

제안: Reduce hesitation and use more confident language. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher because my career goal is to become the CEO of my own company. I hope to build a business that connects different markets.

제안: Try to avoid grammatical errors and hesitations. Use clear and correct sentence structures, and provide specific reasons to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I enjoy travelling overseas, and I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries to better understand their culture and landscapes.

× Actually it has a strange fascination about geography.

✓ Actually, it has a strange fascination with geography.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to express interest or fascination is 'with'. This is a preposition usage issue, but since it is not listed as a separate problem type, it is addressed under singular/plural issue for correction purposes.

× my best scores is about geography everyday.

✓ my best scores are about geography every day.

The subject 'scores' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal; the correct phrase to indicate frequency is 'every day' as two words.

× Every time I got the highest score in geography exam.

✓ Every time I got the highest score in the geography exam.

The noun phrase 'geography exam' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific exam. This is an article usage issue.

× So it make me it, it made me very proud.

✓ So it made me very proud.

The phrase 'it make me it' is incorrect and redundant. The correct past tense verb is 'made' to agree with the past context. The extra 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I think geography plays a significant role in daily life.

✓ I think geography plays a significant role in daily life.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× when we travel, we need to uh, how to, uh, I think, uh, how to, umm, interpret the local weather, local control, local, uh, destiny.

✓ When we travel, we need to know how to interpret the local weather, local climate, and local geography.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Need to how to' is incorrect; it should be 'need to know how to'. Also, 'local control' and 'local destiny' are incorrect phrases in this context; likely intended 'local climate' and 'local geography'. This is a sentence structure and vocabulary issue.

× Yes, in China, uh, when you are a child, you need to, uh, learn geography in primary school.

✓ Yes, in China, when you are a child, you need to learn geography in primary school.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× And uh, I uh, had learned geography until I graduated from senior school, but in, uh, university, I didn't choose geography as.

✓ And I had learned geography until I graduated from senior school, but at university, I didn't choose geography as a subject.

The phrase 'didn't choose geography as' is incomplete; it should be 'as a subject'. Also, 'in university' is better expressed as 'at university'. This is a preposition and sentence structure issue.

× Uh, to be honest, uh, I, uh, didn't want to be any teacher, uh, including, uh, geography teacher.

✓ To be honest, I didn't want to be any teacher, including a geography teacher.

The article 'a' is needed before 'geography teacher' to specify the noun. This is an article usage issue.

× Uh, because my career goal is about to be a CEO of my own company.

✓ Because my career goal is to be the CEO of my own company.

The phrase 'is about to be' implies an immediate future action, which is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'is to be'. Also, 'a CEO' can be correct, but 'the CEO' is more appropriate if referring to a specific position in own company. This is a verb tense and article usage issue.

× I, I'd like to, uh, build a company linked to the different markets.

✓ I'd like to build a company linked to different markets.

The definite article 'the' before 'different markets' is unnecessary unless specifying particular markets. This is an article usage issue.

× Sure. Uh, I always choose to travel overseas.

✓ Sure. I always choose to travel overseas.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× So, uh, I think if I, uh, would went to different countries, I would learn the geography of different countries to, uh, know better about the culture and the landscapes.

✓ So, I think if I went to different countries, I would learn the geography of those countries to know more about the culture and the landscapes.

The phrase 'would went' is incorrect; after 'if', the past simple 'went' should be used, not 'would went'. Also, 'know better about' should be 'know more about'. This is a past tense and adverb usage issue.