Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь избегать лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh". Ответ должен быть более структурированным и лаконичным, например, начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте конкретные причины, используя связующие слова.

예시: I have liked geography since the second grade because it is one of my favorite subjects. It is interesting and helps improve knowledge, which is useful in real life.

제안: Избегайте повторений и слов-паразитов, используйте связующие слова для логичности. Дайте более конкретные примеры, почему география полезна, и завершите мысль полноценно.

예시: Of course, geography is useful because it helps you learn about different countries and cultures. Moreover, it guides you when you travel, so you know interesting places to visit.

제안: Используйте правильные времена и грамматические формы. Ответ должен быть более связным и содержать связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: Yes, I have learned geography at school. I was always interested in it because my teacher was passionate about the subject, which motivated me to learn more.

제안: Избегайте слов-паразитов и неформальных выражений. Формулируйте мысли ясно и грамотно, используя связующие слова для объяснения причин.

예시: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher because my dream is to become a doctor. In my opinion, teaching can be tiring due to managing children.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений, избегая разговорных слов и добавляя связующие слова.

예시: There are many countries in the world, so I will definitely continue learning about their geography. It is never too late to learn something new, and we should always keep studying.

× I like geography since 2nd grade because this is uh, one of the, my favorite, uh, subjects ever because this is so interesting and how it's improve your knowledge and help you in real life.

✓ I have liked geography since 2nd grade because it is one of my favorite subjects ever since it is so interesting and it improves your knowledge and helps you in real life.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'like' in simple present with 'since 2nd grade', which requires present perfect tense 'have liked' to indicate an action starting in the past and continuing to the present. Also, 'how it's improve' should be 'it improves' to match subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× I like geography since 2nd grade because this is uh, one of the, my favorite, uh, subjects ever because this is so interesting and how it's improve your knowledge and help you in real life.

✓ I have liked geography since 2nd grade because it is one of my favorite subjects ever since it is so interesting and it improves your knowledge and helps you in real life.

The phrase 'how it's improve' is incorrect; the verb should be in the present simple form 'it improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The present participle 'improving' is not appropriate here.

× Of course, because, uh, you improve your knowledge and learn more about different countries and their cultures and also when you move, uh, in the country, you know, uh, the places where you can go and.

✓ Of course, because you improve your knowledge and learn more about different countries and their cultures, and also when you move to a country, you know the places where you can go.

The phrase 'when you move, uh, in the country' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to moving to a country. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed proper ending.

× Of course I had. When I'm studied in school, I always was interested in geography.

✓ Of course I have. When I studied in school, I was always interested in geography.

The phrase 'I'm studied' is incorrect; it should be 'I studied' in simple past tense. Also, 'I always was interested' is better as 'I was always interested' for natural word order in past tense.

× And also because my teacher was so interested in his own subject, I learn geography more.

✓ And also because my teacher was so interested in his own subject, I learned more geography.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context of the sentence.

× No, I don't cause in my dream is, uh, become a doctor, uh, cause uh, I, in my opinion, teachers life is so boring and so you get tired, uh, quickly because of the children's, you know.

✓ No, I don't because my dream is to become a doctor, because, in my opinion, a teacher's life is so boring and you get tired quickly because of the children, you know.

The phrase 'cause in my dream is, uh, become a doctor' is incorrect; it should be 'because my dream is to become a doctor'. Also, 'teachers life' needs possessive form 'teacher's life'. The modal verb 'don't' is correctly used but the sentence needed restructuring for clarity.

× There are so many countries in our world so of course I will cause because it's never late to learn something new.

✓ There are so many countries in our world, so of course I will, because it's never too late to learn something new.

The word 'cause' is incorrectly used instead of 'because'. Also, 'never late' should be 'never too late' to be idiomatic. The future tense 'I will' is correctly used here.