Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear in parts. Try to avoid filler words like 'you know' and be more concise. Also, correct small errors like 'Amaz amazes me very' to 'that amazes me a lot'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I like geography very much because I studied disaster management, which involves understanding geography. I am interested in how different geographical areas influence cultures and people, and that amazes me a lot.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitations and informal language like 'uh' and 'you know'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid fillers. Also, explain your points with clearer examples and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, geography is very useful, especially in social sciences. For example, in disaster management, different geographical locations influence various social events. Therefore, understanding geography is essential.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks detail. Always provide a full response with supporting information. Avoid trailing off and try to complete your sentences clearly.

예시: Yes, I have learned geography as part of my bachelor's and master's programs in disaster management, where I studied various geographical concepts in depth.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some repetition and informal phrases like 'you know'. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because I have a strong interest and academic background in the subject. Teaching would allow me to study geography thoroughly and conduct research, especially in remote sensing and GIS.

제안: Your answer has good content but is incomplete and contains informal language and hesitations. Try to complete your sentences and avoid fillers like 'you know' and 'yeah'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I am very excited to learn about the geography of other countries. For example, Poland's flat terrain makes it prone to invasions, while Russia's geography has helped it avoid conquest. Geography is closely connected to history and wars, which makes it fascinating to study.

× So that actually is Amaz amazes me very.

✓ So that actually amazes me very much.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is Amaz amazes' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'amazes' as the verb to express the feeling. Also, 'very' should be followed by 'much' to complete the expression 'amazes me very much'.

× geography is very much useful in terms of social science.

✓ geography is very useful in terms of social science.

The phrase 'very much useful' is incorrect. 'Useful' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' alone, not 'very much'. 'Very much' is used with verbs, not adjectives.

× where I studied in disaster management

✓ where I studied disaster management

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'studied' in this context. The correct phrase is 'studied disaster management' without 'in'.

× different kind of peoples and different kind of cultures.

✓ different kinds of people and different kinds of cultures.

'Peoples' is used to refer to distinct ethnic groups, but here 'people' is more appropriate. Also, 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' when referring to multiple types.

× geographic teacher

✓ geography teacher

The correct noun form is 'geography teacher' rather than 'geographic teacher'. 'Geographic' is an adjective relating to geography but is not used to describe a teacher.

× do researches related to geography

✓ do research related to geography

'Research' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form 'researches'. The correct phrase is 'do research'.