Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显口语化且有语法错误，如"it could help me to relieve stress"应为"they can help me relieve stress"。建议使用更准确的时态和复数形式，同时避免口语缩写。

예시: Yes, I especially love lilies. Flowers give me a sense of relaxation and they can help me relieve stress.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如"elegant of"不正确。建议使用连词连接句子，避免句子碎片，并补充具体细节。

예시: My mom is fond of flowers on our balcony and she plants a variety of them. Although I don't know their names, they have beautiful shapes and look very elegant.

제안: 句子结构不够自然，"the roads will be planted a lot of flowers"表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, in summer, many flowers are planted along the roads, which makes the whole city more beautiful.

제안: 表达不够准确，"photos is"应为"photos are"，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

예시: Sure, whenever I see beautiful flowers, I like to take photos to capture their beauty.

제안: 表达较为口语化，且"in Mother's Day"应为"on Mother's Day"。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意介词使用。

예시: Yes, on Mother's Day, many sons and daughters send flowers to their mothers, and lovers often exchange flowers as well.

× Well, flowers give me a sense of relaxation and it could help me to relieve stress.

✓ Well, flowers give me a sense of relaxation and they can help me relieve stress.

这里的主语是复数flowers，后面用it不正确，应使用they。'could'表示过去或假设，表达习惯上用'can'更合适，且不需要to不定式，直接用动词原形。

× My mom is fond of flowers in our balcony, she plants a variety of flowers.

✓ My mom is fond of flowers on our balcony; she plants a variety of flowers.

介词应为'on'表示在阳台上，'in'不合适。两个句子应用分号或句号分开，避免逗号连接两个独立句。

× Although I don't know the names of these flowers, they do have beautiful shapes and elegant of.

✓ Although I don't know the names of these flowers, they do have beautiful shapes and elegance.

'elegant'是形容词，后面不能直接加'of'，此处应使用名词'elegance'表示优雅。

× Yes, in summer the roads will be planted a lot of flowers which make the whole city more beautiful.

✓ Yes, in summer, a lot of flowers are planted along the roads, which makes the whole city more beautiful.

原句语序不当，'the roads will be planted a lot of flowers'结构错误，应改为'flowers are planted along the roads'。'which'指代单数，谓语用单数makes。

× Sure, when I say beautiful flowers I always want to record it, so photos is one of the best choices.

✓ Sure, when I see beautiful flowers, I always want to record them, so photos are one of the best choices.

'say'应为'see'更符合语境；'it'指代复数flowers应改为'them'；'photos'为复数，谓语动词应用'are'。

× Yes, well, in Mother's Day some sons or daughters will send their mom flowers and between lovers, they will send flowers to each other too.

✓ Yes, well, on Mother's Day, some sons or daughters will send their mom flowers, and lovers will send flowers to each other too.

节日用介词'on'，不是'in'；'between lovers'结构不自然，直接用'lovers'即可；句子中应加逗号分隔。