Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“setting others a pairs of rose”应为“giving others a pair of roses”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. Giving someone a pair of roses is a sincere way to show appreciation, which usually makes them feel happy and grateful.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误，如“flower flower”应为“flower lover”，且句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达，避免重复。

예시: Yes, my grandpa loves flowers. He has planted many kinds in our garden, including roses and lilies, so he is really passionate about them.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有小错误，如“around by my home”应为“around my home”，且“keen on appreciating them”表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers, especially in the park near my home during summer. People enjoy admiring them and spending quality time with their families and friends.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“sign the the picture”应为“send the picture”，“immediately feeling”应为“immediate feelings”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇选择。

예시: Sometimes I take photos of flowers and send them to my friends to share my happiness and express my immediate feelings.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“for the for her support”。建议简化句子，避免重复，表达更准确。

예시: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions. For example, on Mother's Day, we give flowers to our mothers to show support and appreciation.

× Especially I love roses because setting others a pairs of rose can express my sincerely appreciation, which makes them very happy and grateful.

✓ Especially I love roses because giving others a pair of roses can express my sincere appreciation, which makes them very happy and grateful.

这里“a pairs of rose”中“pairs”是复数，前面有不定冠词“a”，应使用单数“pair”，且“rose”应为复数“roses”。此外，“setting”用词不当，应改为“giving”。“sincerely appreciation”中“sincerely”应为形容词“sincere”。

× My grandpa is a flower flower because he applied all kinds of flowers in our garden such as roses, lilies and etcetera.

✓ My grandpa is a flower lover because he planted all kinds of flowers in our garden such as roses, lilies, etc.

“flower flower”应为“flower lover”，表达“花的爱好者”。“applied”用词不当，应为“planted”。“and etcetera”冗余，使用“etc.”即可。

× So I think it's really keen on flowers.

✓ So I think he is really keen on flowers.

句子缺少主语“he”，且“keen on”后应接名词，需补充主语。

× Yes there are, especially in the park around by my home in summer.

✓ Yes, there are, especially in the park around my home in summer.

“around by”重复使用介词，应去掉“by”只用“around”。

× People are keen on appreciating them and having good time with their families and friends.

✓ People are keen on appreciating them and having a good time with their families and friends.

“having good time”缺少冠词“a”，应为“having a good time”。

× Sometimes I take photos of flowers because I can sign the the picture to my friends to share this feeling of happiness and express my immediately feeling.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of flowers because I can send the picture to my friends to share this feeling of happiness and express my immediate feeling.

“sign the the picture”应为“send the picture”，且“immediately feeling”应为形容词“immediate feeling”。

× For example, on Mother's Day, we will send my mother flowers for the for her support and appreciation.

✓ For example, on Mother's Day, we will send my mother flowers to show our support and appreciation.

“for the for her support”结构错误，应改为“to show our support”。