Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your feelings about flowers, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty to nature. I enjoy planting them in my garden, and I feel upset when someone picks them without permission.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Also, be consistent with pronouns and verb tenses to improve clarity.

예시: Yes, my cousin is very fond of flowers. She often visits small nurseries to buy different types of flowers depending on the season.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically, use correct prepositions, and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly.

예시: To be honest, there are not many flowers near my house. However, I know a flower farm in Langley, near Surrey, where they grow and sell various flowers during the spring season.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly, then add specific details with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your ideas.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers daily. However, when I visit parks or gardens, I like to photograph different flowers and share the pictures on my social media.

제안: Your answer covers the main idea but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and clarify your points with specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Absolutely. In my country, it is traditional to send flowers on special occasions such as weddings, anniversaries, and birthdays. Many people prefer to give roses, while others choose different types of flowers depending on the event.

× Yes I begin, I am fond of flowers because they are the gift redness and it's a beautiful creature of the natures and I also like to plant some flowers at my gardens and I don't like to if anyone pluck my flowers.

✓ Yes, I begin by saying I am fond of flowers because they are the gift of redness and a beautiful creation of nature. I also like to plant some flowers in my garden and I don't like it if anyone plucks my flowers.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'begin' without 'by saying' and has awkward phrasing such as 'gift redness' and 'creature of the natures'. 'Creature' should be 'creation' and 'natures' should be 'nature'. Also, 'at my gardens' should be 'in my garden' for correct preposition and singular form. The phrase 'I don't like to if anyone pluck my flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like it if anyone plucks my flowers' to use the correct verb form and structure.

× Yes, my best friend cousin who is very very fond of the flowers. He always finds some small nurseries wear flowers, plants are planted and she always try to buy new and different type of flowers and depend on the season.

✓ Yes, my best friend's cousin is very fond of flowers. He always finds some small nurseries where flowers and plants are planted, and he always tries to buy new and different types of flowers depending on the season.

The sentence has pronoun inconsistency: 'He' and then 'she' referring to the same person. It should consistently be 'he'. Also, 'best friend cousin' should be 'best friend's cousin' to show possession. 'Wear' is a wrong word; it should be 'where'. 'Try' should be 'tries' to agree with third person singular. 'Type' should be plural 'types' because of 'new and different' implying multiple types. 'Depend on the season' should be 'depending on the season' for correct verb form.

× To be honest there is no location in my near House of a number of flowers, but I saw a one locations outside of the Surrey in the Langley the beer farm. They produce number of flowers, provide different variety and sell them during the spring season to the many shopping.

✓ To be honest, there is no location near my house with a number of flowers, but I saw a location outside Surrey in Langley called the Bear Farm. They produce a number of flowers, provide different varieties, and sell them during the spring season to many shoppers.

The sentence has several issues: 'no location in my near House' should be 'no location near my house'. 'A one locations' is incorrect; it should be 'a location'. 'The Surrey' should be 'Surrey' without 'the'. 'The beer farm' is likely a typo for 'Bear Farm'. 'Number of flowers' needs an article 'a number of flowers'. 'Provide different variety' should be 'provide different varieties' (plural). 'Sell them during the spring season to the many shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'sell them during the spring season to many shoppers'.

× I don't think so. I have much time to click pictures in the daily life I give. I click the picture of flowers when I go outside visiting any league and garden. That time I click the picture of different flowers and create the story for my social media and also send some snaps to my.

✓ I don't think so. I don't have much time to take pictures in daily life. I take pictures of flowers when I go outside to visit any lake or garden. At that time, I take pictures of different flowers and create stories for my social media and also send some snaps to my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I have much time' which should be 'I don't have much time'. 'Click pictures' is informal; 'take pictures' is better. 'Visiting any league and garden' is unclear; likely 'visit any lake or garden' is intended. 'That time I click the picture' should be 'At that time, I take pictures'. 'Create the story' should be 'create stories'. 'Send some snaps to my' is incomplete; it should be 'send some snaps to my friends'.

× Absolutely. In my country this is traditional, sending a flowers on the special occasion, on the wedding anniversary, on wedding time, on the birthday. Some people give preference to give the Rose flower and on the other side many peoples like to send a flowers as it was shipped to the court.

✓ Absolutely. In my country, it is traditional to send flowers on special occasions, such as wedding anniversaries, weddings, and birthdays. Some people prefer to give rose flowers, and on the other hand, many people like to send flowers as they are shipped to the court.

The sentence has quantifier errors: 'a flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'On the special occasion' should be 'on special occasions'. 'On wedding time' should be 'at weddings'. 'Many peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural. 'As it was shipped to the court' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'as they are shipped to the court' is better but context is unclear.