Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'ate a lot of beauty' nên là 'add a lot of beauty'). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much because they add a lot of beauty and color to our surroundings. They also have a pleasant fragrance that makes the atmosphere more refreshing and attractive. For example, when I decorate my house with fresh flowers, I feel happier.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng những cụm từ không tự nhiên như 'a person who is crazy about flowers' và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

예시: My mom loves flowers very much. She buys at least one bunch every day to decorate our house because their smell and beauty are very attractive.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'Our rooms is very good'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và số nhiều số ít đúng, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, there is a flower market near my house where my family and I often go on weekends to choose our favorite flowers to decorate our home. Our rooms look very beautiful, and we all enjoy the variety of flowers.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và trật tự từ trong câu, ví dụ 'I will photos, take photos' không đúng. Hãy luyện tập cách sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn và tương lai đơn chính xác, đồng thời tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, as I mentioned before, my mom buys at least one bunch of flowers every day. So, I take photos of these flowers with my phone daily and show them to my family on weekends.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các câu. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và chú ý đến số nhiều, số ít cũng như cách dùng từ đúng.

예시: In Vietnam, people often send flowers on special days like Teachers' Day or Mother's Day. They give lovely bunches of flowers to show their appreciation, which usually makes the recipients feel happy.

× Yes, I love flowers very much because they ate a lot of beauty and color our surroundings.

✓ Yes, I love flowers very much because they add a lot of beauty and color to our surroundings.

The verb 'ate' is the past tense of 'eat' and is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is that flowers contribute beauty and color, so the correct verb is 'add' in the present tense. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed after 'color' to indicate what is being colored.

× Yes, I love flowers very much because they ate a lot of beauty and color our surroundings.

✓ Yes, I love flowers very much because they add a lot of beauty and color to our surroundings.

The phrase 'color our surroundings' requires the preposition 'to' after 'color' to correctly express that the surroundings receive the color. Without 'to', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× For example, when I decorate my house with fresh flowers, I feel more happy.

✓ For example, when I decorate my house with fresh flowers, I feel happier.

The phrase 'more happy' is less natural than the comparative form 'happier'. Using 'happier' is the correct comparative adjective form to express increased happiness.

× Like every day she needs to buy at least one bunch of flowers to decorate our house.

✓ She needs to buy at least one bunch of flowers every day to decorate our house.

The phrase 'Like every day' is incorrectly used at the beginning. The correct placement is 'every day' after the verb phrase to indicate frequency.

× Because of its smell and beauty, it's very attractive.

✓ Because of their smell and beauty, they are very attractive.

The pronouns 'its' and 'it's' refer to singular nouns, but 'flowers' is plural. Therefore, plural pronouns 'their' and 'they are' should be used.

× Yes, near my house has a flower market that my family and I often go there in the weekend and choose our favorite flower to decorate our house.

✓ Yes, near my house there is a flower market where my family and I often go on the weekend to choose our favorite flowers to decorate our house.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure at the beginning. Adding 'there is' clarifies existence. Also, 'go there' is redundant when 'where' is used. 'On the weekend' is the correct preposition. 'Flowers' should be plural to match 'favorite' and context.

× Our rooms is very good and really beautiful that we all enjoy the variety of flowers.

✓ Our rooms are very nice and really beautiful, so we all enjoy the variety of flowers.

The subject 'rooms' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'good' is less appropriate than 'nice' or 'pleasant' for rooms. The conjunction 'that' is incorrectly used; 'so' better connects the clauses.

× Yes, like as I say before that every day my mom buy at least one bunch of flowers.

✓ Yes, as I said before, every day my mom buys at least one bunch of flowers.

The phrase 'like as I say before' is incorrect; 'as I said before' is the correct past tense expression. Also, 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with third person singular subject 'mom'.

× So every day I will photos, take photos of this bunch of flowers in my phone.

✓ So every day I will take photos of this bunch of flowers with my phone.

The phrase 'I will photos, take photos' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'I will take photos'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'with my phone' to indicate the instrument used.

× In the weekend I will show it to my family.

✓ On the weekend, I will show them to my family.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on the weekend' is correct. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple photos.

× Just in Vietnam, people often send flowers on special day like teachers day or Mother days.

✓ In Vietnam, people often send flowers on special days like Teachers' Day or Mother's Day.

The phrase 'Just in Vietnam' is better as 'In Vietnam'. 'Special day' should be plural 'special days' to match examples. Also, proper nouns like 'Teachers' Day' and 'Mother's Day' require apostrophes and capitalization.

× They give a lovely bunch of flowers to show their appreciation.

✓ They give a lovely bunch of flowers to show their appreciation.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.

× Usually makes the makes them feel happy.

✓ Usually, it makes them feel happy.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has repeated words 'makes the makes'. Adding 'it' as the subject and removing redundancy corrects the sentence.