Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use correct expressions like 'I love flowers' instead of 'I am obsessed with the flower'. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say 'I love flowers because their colors make me feel relaxed and peaceful. I also buy flowers every day.'

예시: Yes, I love flowers because their colors make me feel relaxed and peaceful. I also buy flowers every day to decorate my home.

제안: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I have a friend who loves flowers. She often talked about them when we were at university. People would give her flowers, and she was always happy to receive them.'

예시: Yes, I have a friend who loves flowers. She often talked about them when we were at university. People would give her flowers, and she was always happy to receive them.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'Actually, my neighborhood does not have many flowers. However, there is a house nearby that has many flowers, which makes it colorful and beautiful.'

예시: Actually, my neighborhood does not have many flowers. However, there is a house nearby that has many flowers, which makes it colorful and beautiful.

제안: Make your answer more fluent and clear. Use correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially in winter because they look more beautiful with the clouds. The combination creates a lovely scene.'

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially in winter because they look more beautiful with the clouds. The combination creates a lovely scene.

제안: Use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence flow. For example, say 'Yes, in my country, people believe that flowers symbolize love and can connect two people. Therefore, they often give flowers as gifts.'

예시: Yes, in my country, people believe that flowers symbolize love and can connect two people. Therefore, they often give flowers as gifts.

× Yes, I am.

✓ Yes, I do.

The question 'Do you love flowers?' requires a 'do' auxiliary verb in the answer, not 'am'. 'I am' is incorrect here because 'love' is a verb, not a state of being in this context.

× Actually I am obsessed with the flower.

✓ Actually, I am obsessed with flowers.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'flower'. When speaking generally about flowers, no article or the plural form without 'the' is appropriate.

× I like watching the color of flower to give you the feeling of relaxing and convenient and comfortable and also peace.

✓ I like watching the colors of flowers because they give you a feeling of relaxation, convenience, comfort, and peace.

The preposition 'of' is correct but 'color of flower' should be plural 'colors of flowers' to match the general statement. Also, 'to give you the feeling' is better expressed as 'because they give you a feeling'. The adjectives 'relaxing', 'convenient', 'comfortable' are better as nouns or noun phrases here.

× And actually I pay a lot of flower every day.

✓ And actually, I buy a lot of flowers every day.

The verb 'pay' is incorrect in this context; 'buy' is appropriate. Also, 'a lot of flower' should be plural 'a lot of flowers'.

× Yes actually I have a friend that also obsessed but the flower she always talk about flower.

✓ Yes, actually I have a friend who is also obsessed with flowers; she always talks about flowers.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who' for people. 'Obsessed but the flower' is incorrect; it should be 'obsessed with flowers'. Verb agreement 'talk' should be 'talks' for third person singular.

× She always tell us when we was in university that she wanted flowers.

✓ She always told us when we were in university that she wanted flowers.

The verb 'tell' should be in past tense 'told' to match 'was'. 'We was' is incorrect; it should be 'we were'.

× She won't pay flower and and and help her they will give her a pocket of a flower and she happy.

✓ She wouldn't pay for flowers, and when she needed help, they would give her a bouquet of flowers, and she was happy.

'Won't pay flower' is incorrect; 'wouldn't pay for flowers' is correct. 'Pocket of a flower' is incorrect; 'bouquet of flowers' is the correct phrase. Verb tenses and modal verbs adjusted for past habitual actions.

× Actually my neighborhood is not not have a lot of flower, but we have a house near of us that they having a lot of flower and that make their houses colorful and beautiful.

✓ Actually, my neighborhood does not have a lot of flowers, but there is a house near us that has a lot of flowers, and that makes their house colorful and beautiful.

'Is not not have' is incorrect; 'does not have' is correct for present tense negative. 'Near of us' should be 'near us'. 'They having' should be 'has'. Subject-verb agreement corrected.

× I actually I prefer taking photo for of a flower in winter because it's more beautiful and.

✓ I actually prefer taking photos of flowers in winter because they are more beautiful.

'Taking photo for of a flower' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'taking photos of flowers'. Also, 'it's more beautiful' should be plural 'they are more beautiful' to match 'photos' and 'flowers'.

× The look of the cloud and flower with each gather.

✓ The look of the clouds and flowers together.

'Each gather' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'together'. Also, plural forms 'clouds' and 'flowers' are appropriate here.

× Yes, they are actually here in my country, they believe that flower can connect 2 of people like it's it's a symbol of love.

✓ Yes, actually here in my country, people believe that flowers can connect two people as a symbol of love.

'They are actually here' is awkward; better to say 'actually here'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. '2 of people' should be 'two people'. 'Like it's it's' is redundant; 'as a symbol' is better.