Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“this ribbon color”应为“their bright color”，“to eat the flower”表达不准确。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免表达混乱。

예시: Yes, I definitely love flowers because of their bright colors and pleasant smell. I usually buy sunflowers to decorate my room, which brightens it up. Seeing many flowers always makes me feel very happy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“my mom absolutely love”应为“my mom absolutely loves”，句子结构不够清晰。建议加强主谓一致和句子连贯性。

예시: Oh, my mom absolutely loves flowers. Therefore, my father always buys flowers for her on special occasions like their anniversary or Christmas because it makes her very happy.

제안: 回答中“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”，且句子结构较为简单，缺少连接词。建议注意名词复数形式和使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Oh yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live. My neighbor and my mom always plant many flowers in our garden, and the park near our house also has plenty of flowers, which makes the environment look very beautiful.

제안: 回答中“photo”应为复数“photos”，“flower”应为复数“flowers”，且“friend”应为复数“friends”。建议注意名词复数形式和句子流畅性。

예시: Yes, I always take photos of flowers in my daily life. I love to capture their beauty when I take walks around my home, and I also post them on my Instagram to share with my friends. They often give me very positive feedback.

제안: 回答中“the standing flower”表达不清晰，可能想表达“sending flowers”。句子中存在语法错误和重复，如“on our on their birthday”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子简洁性。

예시: Oh yes, sending flowers is quite common in my country. Flowers are a good way to show love and appreciation. For example, people often send flowers to their loved ones on Valentine's Day, birthdays, or even at Christmas to express their feelings.

× Yes I definitely love flower because of this ribbon color and the smell.

✓ Yes, I definitely love flowers because of their ribbon color and smell.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers，因为这里指的是一般的花的种类或多朵花。

× I usually buy sunflower to decorate my room to eat the flower, make my room brighten up and when I see so many flowers it make me feel very happy.

✓ I usually buy sunflowers to decorate my room, to eat the flowers, make my room brighten up, and when I see so many flowers, it makes me feel very happy.

sunflower 和 flower 应该用复数形式 sunflowers 和 flowers，因为指的是多朵花。

× when I see so many flowers it make me feel very happy.

✓ when I see so many flowers, it makes me feel very happy.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应该用 makes 而不是 make。

× Oh, my mom absolutely love flowers.

✓ Oh, my mom absolutely loves flowers.

主语 my mom 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 love 应该加 s 变成 loves。

× So my father always buys flowers to my mom on some special occasions like their anniversary or some or like Christmas because my mom it will be very happy to see flower.

✓ So my father always buys flowers for my mom on some special occasions like their anniversary or Christmas because my mom will be very happy to see flowers.

buy 的搭配介词是 buy something for someone，而不是 buy something to someone。

× because my mom it will be very happy to see flower.

✓ because my mom will be very happy to see flowers.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers，因为指的是多朵花。

× Oh yes, there are a lot of flower where I live.

✓ Oh yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers，因为表示很多花。

× My neighbor and my mom always plan a lot of flower in our garden and the park near our house also plant a lot of flower, which make the environment look very beautiful.

✓ My neighbor and my mom always plant a lot of flowers in our garden, and the park near our house also plants a lot of flowers, which makes the environment look very beautiful.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers；plant 的主语是复数和单数，谓语动词要相应变化；make 应该用 makes，因为主语是 which 指代单数环境。

× My neighbor and my mom always plan a lot of flower in our garden and the park near our house also plant a lot of flower, which make the environment look very beautiful.

✓ My neighbor and my mom always plant a lot of flowers in our garden, and the park near our house also plants a lot of flowers, which makes the environment look very beautiful.

主语和谓语动词不一致，My neighbor and my mom 是复数，谓语用 plant；the park 是单数，谓语用 plants；which 指代单数环境，谓语用 makes。

× Yes, I always take photo of flower in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of flowers in my daily life.

photo 和 flower 应该用复数形式 photos 和 flowers，因为指的是多张照片和多朵花。

× I love to capture their beauty when I take a walk around my home and I also post them on my Instagram to share with my friend.

✓ I love to capture their beauty when I take a walk around my home, and I also post them on my Instagram to share with my friends.

share with 后面应该用复数 friends，因为通常是分享给多个朋友。

× They also gave me very positive feedback.

✓ They also give me very positive feedback.

时态应与上下文保持一致，使用一般现在时 give；feedback 是不可数名词，无复数形式。

× Oh yeah, the standing flower is quite common in my country.

✓ Oh yeah, standing flowers are quite common in my country.

standing flower 应该用复数形式 standing flowers；谓语动词与复数主语保持一致用 are。

× Flower is a good way to show our love and appreciation.

✓ Flowers are a good way to show our love and appreciation.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers；谓语动词与复数主语保持一致用 are。

× For example, people may send their lover flowers on Valentine's Day or on our on their birthday.

✓ For example, people may send flowers to their lover on Valentine's Day or on their birthday.

send 的正确结构是 send something to someone，lover 前面应加介词 to；去掉多余的 on our。

× because my mom it will be very happy to see flower.

✓ because my mom will be very happy to see flowers.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers；去掉多余的 it。