Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复，注意冠词和单复数的使用，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. I often visit flower shops to buy them and decorate my home. Their fragrance and beautiful appearance always make me feel happy and brighten up my house.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词，避免重复，注意主谓一致，使内容更具体。

예시: Yes, one of my friends really loves flowers, especially green plants. Therefore, we often go to flower shops together to buy some plants to decorate our homes. We enjoy watching them grow because they freshen up the house.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够自然，部分表达不准确。建议调整句子顺序，使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I grow many flowers on my balcony, including two rose plants. Since they need plenty of sunlight, I place them in the sunniest spot. Seeing them every morning really freshens me up.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，注意冠词使用，句子更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers, I try to take photos from good angles and share them on social media. Looking at these pictures always makes me feel happy and brightens my day.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，注意词汇搭配和语法，使表达更准确。

예시: No, I think people in my country are usually too shy to give flowers because a bouquet is very noticeable. However, I often give flowers to my boyfriend, and now he also buys flowers to give to me.

× I enjoy going to flower shop to buy some buy some flowers and use this flower to decorate my home.

✓ I enjoy going to flower shops to buy some flowers and use these flowers to decorate my home.

这里的“flower shop”和“flower”应该用复数形式，因为表示的是一般的花店和多朵花。

× The fragrance and the and pretty appearance of flowers can make me feel good and and brighten up the my house.

✓ The fragrance and the pretty appearance of flowers can make me feel good and brighten up my house.

“the and”是多余的，且“the my house”中“the”不应该和“my”同时出现，应该去掉“the”。

× Yes, one of my friends really love love flowers, especially green plants.

✓ Yes, one of my friends really loves flowers, especially green plants.

主语是单数“one”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“loves”。

× As a result, we usually go to flower shop together and we can buy some green plants back to home to decorate our house.

✓ As a result, we usually go to flower shops together and we can buy some green plants back home to decorate our house.

“flower shop”应为复数形式“flower shops”，且“back to home”应改为“back home”。

× Look, we love to see green plants growing well and freshen my house.

✓ Look, we love to see green plants growing well and freshening my house.

“freshen”应使用现在分词形式“freshening”来表示伴随动作。

× Yes, I grow many flower plants in my balcony.

✓ Yes, I grow many flower plants on my balcony.

“in my balcony”应改为“on my balcony”，因为阳台是一个表面。

× Especially there are two plants of roses.

✓ Especially, there are two rose plants.

“plants of roses”表达不自然，改为“rose plants”更符合英语习惯。

× They really need plenty of sun, so I put them in front of the highest place of my balcony to receive more energy from the sun.

✓ They really need plenty of sun, so I put them in the highest place on my balcony to receive more energy from the sun.

“in front of the highest place of my balcony”表达不准确，应为“in the highest place on my balcony”。

× And every morning this freshen me up.

✓ And every morning this freshens me up.

主语“this”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s。

× Yes, whenever I see a beautiful flowers I will try to take take photo of them in a very beautiful angle and share this to my social media.

✓ Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers I will try to take photos of them from a very beautiful angle and share them on my social media.

“a beautiful flowers”中“flowers”应为复数，前面不加冠词；“take take photo”重复且“photo”应为复数“photos”；“in a very beautiful angle”应为“from a very beautiful angle”；“share this to my social media”应为“share them on my social media”。

× I love to see every every beautiful flowers and this can make me feel good and brighten up.

✓ I love to see every beautiful flower and this can make me feel good and brighten up.

“every”后应接单数名词，“flowers”应改为“flower”；“every every”重复。

× No, I think my country's person are too shy to to send to give up flowers because a bunch of flowers is very appearing.

✓ No, I think people in my country are too shy to give flowers because a bunch of flowers is very eye-catching.

“my country's person”应改为“people in my country”；“to to send to give up flowers”表达混乱，应为“to give flowers”；“appearing”用词错误，应为“eye-catching”或“attractive”。

× But I really tend this to my boyfriend and my boyfriend now can easily to buy flowers and send it to me.

✓ But I really give flowers to my boyfriend and now my boyfriend can easily buy flowers and send them to me.

“tend this to my boyfriend”表达错误，应为“give flowers to my boyfriend”；“can easily to buy”中“to”多余；“send it to me”中“it”应为复数“them”。