Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say "bright colors" instead of "such a bright colors" and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they have bright colors and pleasant scents. They can brighten up any room, so I enjoy having them in my house.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct singular/plural forms and avoid run-on sentences.

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers and has a garden full of them. I often help her take care of the plants because gardening is her favorite hobby.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid awkward phrases like "there is a greenery just" and be more specific about the environment.

예시: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because it's a city with limited green spaces. Also, the climate is not very suitable for growing many types of flowers.

제안: Focus on clear and correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like "photo photos of lover" and "go for rice." Keep your answer coherent and complete.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy capturing their beauty. Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and sometimes I share the pictures with my friends.

제안: Avoid repetition such as "It's it's." Use singular/plural forms correctly and add linking words for better flow. Also, be more specific about occasions and cultural significance.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays and weddings. It is a traditional way to express love and appreciation, and there are many florists, so it's easy to buy flowers.

× Yes, I like flowers because they have such a bright colors and nice smells and they make any room look better and I like to have them in my house.

✓ Yes, I like flowers because they have such bright colors and nice smells and they make any room look better and I like to have them in my house.

The phrase 'a bright colors' incorrectly combines the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'colors'. The article 'a' should be removed to correctly modify the plural noun 'colors'.

× Yes, my mom loves flowers and she has a garden full of them and I spend a lot of time taking care of them and flower is her hobby.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers and she has a garden full of them and I spend a lot of time taking care of them and flowers are her hobby.

The word 'flower' is singular but refers to a general hobby involving multiple flowers, so it should be plural 'flowers'. Also, the verb should agree in number with the plural subject, so 'is' changes to 'are'.

× No, there aren't many flowers where I live. It's a city area with not much space, green space and the climate isn't great for flowers and there is a greenery just.

✓ No, there aren't many flowers where I live. It's a city area with not much green space and the climate isn't great for flowers and there is just greenery.

The phrase 'a greenery' is incorrect because 'greenery' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, the order of words 'green space' was awkward; 'not much green space' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I do take photo photos of lover I like to capture from their beauty. Then I go for rice and it's a relaxing hobby for me and sometimes I share this picture in.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of flowers I like to capture for their beauty. Then I go for a walk and it's a relaxing hobby for me and sometimes I share these pictures online.

'Photo photos' is a repetition error; it should be 'photos'. 'Lover' is incorrect and should be 'flowers'. 'Go for rice' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'go for a walk'. 'This picture in' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'share these pictures online' to make sense.

× Yes, the people in my country often send flowers especially for a special occasions like birthday and weddings. It's it's a traditional way to show love and appreciation. There are many florists and it's easy to do.

✓ Yes, the people in my country often send flowers especially for special occasions like birthdays and weddings. It's a traditional way to show love and appreciation. There are many florists and it's easy to do.

The phrase 'a special occasions' incorrectly uses the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'occasions'. The article should be removed. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'weddings' and the general meaning.