Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the word 'flowers' too often and try to add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, definitely. I love flowers because they are one of nature's most beautiful gifts, and I often use them as presents for my loved ones.

제안: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about why your cousin loves flowers and how they take care of them.

예시: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For instance, my cousin is very fond of gardening and enjoys planting and caring for various flowers in their garden.

제안: Your answer can be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the flowers.

예시: Yes, I have a garden at home with many flowers such as roses, lilies, and sunflowers. We really appreciate these beautiful gifts of nature.

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers during my free time because I find them very beautiful and relaxing to capture.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence flow by using linking words. Be more specific about occasions and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, in my country, people frequently send flowers as gifts, especially on occasions like Rose Day, birthdays, and other celebrations, because flowers are considered beautiful and meaningful presents.

× I love flowers because these are the most important gift of our nature and I also use flowers as a gift.

✓ I love flowers because these are the most important gifts of our nature and I also use flowers as gifts.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to multiple flowers, which are countable and plural in this context. Similarly, 'as a gift' should be 'as gifts' to match the plural subject 'flowers'.

× Yes I know many people who loves flowers but if talk about one my cousin loves so many flowers because they love to put the flowers from plant and take care of them.

✓ Yes, I know many people who love flowers but if I talk about one, my cousin loves many flowers because they love to take flowers from plants and take care of them.

The verb 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Also, 'if talk about one' is missing the subject 'I'. 'So many flowers' is better as 'many flowers' for natural usage. 'Put the flowers from plant' is incorrect; it should be 'take flowers from plants'.

× Yes, at my home there is one garden and there are a lot of flowers like rose flower, Lily flower and sunflower and so on.

✓ Yes, at my home there is one garden and there are a lot of flowers like roses, lilies, sunflowers and so on.

The names of flowers should be in plural form when referring to multiple flowers: 'rose flower' to 'roses', 'Lily flower' to 'lilies', and 'sunflower' to 'sunflowers'.

× Because these flowers are important gift of our nature which we really like.

✓ Because these flowers are important gifts of our nature which we really like.

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to multiple flowers, which are countable and plural in this context.

× I spend most of the time with taking pictures of flowers.

✓ I spend most of the time taking pictures of flowers.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary before the gerund 'taking'. The correct structure is 'spend time doing something' without 'with'.

× Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others as their gift specially on rose day and their birthdays and other any event.

✓ Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others as their gifts, especially on Rose Day, their birthdays, and any other events.

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to agree with 'flowers'. 'Specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially'. 'Other any event' is incorrect; it should be 'any other events'. Also, 'Rose Day' should be capitalized as a proper noun.

× People always love flower to use as a gift because these are very beautiful.

✓ People always love flowers to use as gifts because these are very beautiful.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural context. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to agree with 'flowers'.