Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, because of their pleasant fragrance and beautiful structure. Moreover, I am particularly fond of their vibrant red colour, which I find very appealing.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, try to be more specific about your mom's love for flowers.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. Every morning, she wakes up early and takes a walk in the rose garden near our house because she enjoys the fresh air and the beauty of the flowers.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to be more specific about the types of flowers and their surroundings.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my home because I live in the countryside. For example, there are roses, sunflowers, and various other plants that make the area very colourful and pleasant.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why you take photos of flowers.

예시: To be honest, I don't take photos of flowers every day. However, whenever I see a unique flower, I take out my phone and capture its picture because it reminds me of the beauty of our environment.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases and explain occasions clearly with linking words.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthday parties, engagement ceremonies, and funerals. Sending flowers is a common way to express congratulations or condolences.

× I love flowers because of their smells and their structure, especially the roses.

✓ I love flowers because of their smell and their structure, especially the roses.

The word 'smells' is incorrect here because 'smell' is an uncountable noun when referring to the scent of flowers. Therefore, it should be singular 'smell'.

× I like their red color.

✓ I like their red colour.

The sentence is grammatically correct but 'color' is American English spelling. Since the rest of the text uses British English spelling (e.g., 'favourite'), 'colour' is preferred for consistency.

× my mom also like flower, every morning she was wake up and go for a walk in the Rose garden.

✓ My mom also likes flowers; every morning she wakes up and goes for a walk in the rose garden.

'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject 'mom' (third person singular). 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. 'Was wake up' is incorrect; it should be 'wakes up' to indicate habitual action in present tense. 'Go' should be 'goes' to agree with third person singular subject.

× She enjoy her walking every day.

✓ She enjoys her walking every day.

'Enjoy' should be 'enjoys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× Yes, there's a lot of flower around my home, my home located in the countryside and nearby my home there is a lot of flower with a different variety such as a roses, sunflowers and other plants.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers around my home. My home is located in the countryside and nearby there are a lot of flowers with different varieties such as roses, sunflowers and other plants.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular; it should be 'there are' for plural 'flowers'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'My home located' is missing the verb 'is'. 'A different variety' should be 'different varieties' to match plural 'flowers'. 'A roses' is incorrect; 'roses' alone is correct.

× Be honest with you, I don't take a photo of flowers daily but whenever I saw a saw a unique flowers I open my phone and take the picture because of its remind me a unique things about our environment.

✓ To be honest with you, I don't take photos of flowers daily but whenever I see a unique flower, I open my phone and take a picture because it reminds me of unique things about our environment.

'Be honest with you' should be 'To be honest with you' as a fixed phrase. 'Saw a saw a' is a repetition and incorrect past tense; it should be 'see' to match present tense habitual action. 'A unique flowers' is incorrect; 'flower' should be singular with 'a'. 'Take the picture' can be 'take a picture' for generality. 'Because of its remind me' is incorrect; it should be 'because it reminds me'. 'A unique things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and should not have 'a'.

× Yes people do. In my country people usually send a flower to another when some occasional birthday party, ring ceremony.

✓ Yes, people do. In my country, people usually send flowers to others on occasions like birthday parties and ring ceremonies.

'A flower' should be plural 'flowers' because people send flowers generally. 'Another' is incorrect; it should be 'others'. 'Some occasional birthday party' should be 'occasions like birthday parties' for correct plural and preposition use.

× Another way, another occasion people use PE.

✓ On other occasions, people use PE.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Another way, another occasion' is not a proper phrase. It should be 'On other occasions' to indicate different times. 'PE' is unclear and may be a typo or abbreviation needing clarification.

× People also send a flower to in the phone funeral.

✓ People also send flowers to funerals.

'A flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'To in the phone funeral' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'to funerals'. The phrase 'in the phone funeral' seems to be a mistake or typo and is corrected to 'to funerals' for clarity.