Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达重复且语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用恰当的词汇表达感受。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially cherry blossoms and roses. They make me feel energetic and happy whenever I see them.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句子说明原因。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers, especially roses. She likes them because they symbolize strength and beauty, which she admires.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体例子支持，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

예시: There are not many flowers where I live, except in my hometown. However, when I visited Japan recently, I saw many cherry blossoms, and lots of people were taking photos of them.

제안: 回答表达混乱，句子不完整。建议用简洁句子表达习惯，并说明原因或感受。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. I like to collect pictures of flowers in different colors, one for each day of the week.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用简单句子说明送花的习俗和原因。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts to show love and appreciation. For example, on Mother's Day, many people give flowers to their mothers to express gratitude.

× Yes I really like the flowers like for example love cherry blooms or the Rose because I think when I saw the Rose it made me feel very strong and energetic and also with the steak makes me feel more powerful when I stole it and also.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers, for example, cherry blossoms or roses because I think when I see a rose, it makes me feel very strong and energetic, and also the scent makes me feel more powerful when I smell it.

复数和单数使用错误。'the flowers'不需要定冠词，'love cherry blooms'应为'like cherry blossoms'，'the Rose'应为复数'roses'或单数'a rose'，'steak'应为'scent'，'stole it'应为'smell it'。需要注意名词的单复数形式和正确词汇的使用。

× Yes, I know my mom, her name is Amy. She really like Love Rose because when I was young she usually play the cartoon about beauty and the beat and there is a very strong and permanent route in the films, so she liked the strong power.

✓ Yes, I know my mom, her name is Amy. She really likes roses because when I was young she usually played cartoons about beauty and the beast, and there is a very strong and permanent root in the films, so she liked the strong power.

复数和单数错误。'She really like'应为'She really likes'（主谓一致），'Love Rose'应为'roses'，'play the cartoon'应为'played cartoons'，'route'应为'root'。注意动词时态和名词复数形式。

× Actually I don't think there are a lot of flowers beside my hometown but I recently went to Japan and there is a cherry blonde and I saw a lot of people watch and take a photo about the cherry person blossom so I think it's more interesting if.

✓ Actually, I don't think there are a lot of flowers near my hometown, but I recently went to Japan and there are cherry blossoms, and I saw a lot of people watching and taking photos of the cherry blossoms, so I think it's more interesting.

'there is a cherry blonde'应为'there are cherry blossoms'，'beside'用法不当，应为'near'，'watch and take a photo about'应为'watching and taking photos of'。注意there be结构的单复数和介词的正确使用。

× Yeah, I really like to check out flowers in my daily life when I saw I like to collect like the rainbow colors cause a week have seven days. So I took one colors of the flower for one days and recently I classed like 100 of the flowers picture It made me very.

✓ Yeah, I really like to check out flowers in my daily life. When I see them, I like to collect flowers of different rainbow colors because a week has seven days. So I take one color of flower for each day, and recently I have collected about 100 pictures of flowers. It makes me very happy.

动词-ing形式错误。'when I saw'应为'when I see'（时态一致），'cause a week have'应为'because a week has'，'I took one colors'应为'I take one color'，'for one days'应为'for each day'，'I classed like 100 of the flowers picture'应为'I have collected about 100 pictures of flowers'。注意动词时态和-ing形式的正确使用。

× Yes. In my country, people usually send the flowers as a gift for someone or a share or meaningful love. For example, in the Mother's Day, we usually send the connection for mothers to for the civilizer about appreciate and for love for mom. So I think it's very important.

✓ Yes. In my country, people usually send flowers as gifts to someone to share meaningful love. For example, on Mother's Day, we usually send flowers to mothers to express appreciation and love. So I think it's very important.

介词使用错误。'send the flowers as a gift for someone'应为'send flowers as gifts to someone'，'in the Mother's Day'应为'on Mother's Day'，'send the connection for mothers to for the civilizer about appreciate'表达不清，改为'send flowers to mothers to express appreciation'。注意介词和表达的准确性。