Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，"romantic or grateful"的用词不当，建议使用更合适的形容词表达情感，如"romantic or gratitude"。同时，句子结构可以更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are colorful and beautiful, and they often convey feelings of romance or gratitude.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达意思，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: My grandpa loves flowers and taking care of them is his favorite hobby. He says it helps him appreciate life and makes him feel happy.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如"notice"用法不当，句子不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，词汇更准确。

예시: Yes, I live with my parents and grandparents, and we have a backyard full of flowers like roses and sunflowers.

제안: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱，语法错误明显。建议直接回答问题，说明拍摄花的原因，并使用正确时态和词汇。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I find them beautiful and they brighten my day.

제안: 回答较好，但部分表达不够地道，如"when some special festival"应改为"on special occasions"。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: Yes, people often send flowers to express gratitude or love. For example, I send flowers to my parents on special occasions and to my classmates on their birthdays.

× Yes, I think they're colorful and very beautiful, and most of them just convey a sense of romantic or grateful.

✓ Yes, I think they're colorful and very beautiful, and most of them just convey a sense of romance or gratitude.

这里“romantic”和“grateful”是形容词，但句子需要名词形式来表达“浪漫的感觉”或“感激的感觉”，所以应使用名词“romance”和“gratitude”。

× I would like to say it is my grandpa actually taking care of flowers was his favorite thing to do.

✓ I would like to say that my grandpa actually taking care of flowers was his favorite thing to do.

句子缺少连接词“that”来引导宾语从句，导致结构不完整。

× He said that it's just his way to appreciate life and they and he will be in a super good mood to see flowers be taking goodwill.

✓ He said that it's just his way to appreciate life, and he will be in a super good mood when he sees flowers as a sign of goodwill.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的时态表达，导致意思不清晰。需要调整句子结构，使其逻辑通顺。

× Yes, notice I live with my parents and grandparent. Grandparents.

✓ Yes, I live with my parents and grandparents.

“grandparent”应为复数形式“grandparents”，因为后文也提到复数。

× We have a backyard just outside of our house that is full of flowers, so for example rose and sunflowers and something like that.

✓ We have a backyard just outside our house that is full of flowers, such as roses and sunflowers and things like that.

“rose”应为复数“roses”，且“something like that”应改为复数形式“things like that”以匹配上下文。

× Yes, especially when they all groom me.

✓ Yes, especially when I groom myself.

“they all groom me”主语和宾语不匹配，且表达不清，应改为“I groom myself”表示自己打理自己。

× I like to have makeup and took a lot of selfie with them.

✓ I like to put on makeup and take a lot of selfies with them.

“took”是过去式，与前面的“like to”不搭配，应使用动词原形“take”；“selfie”应为复数“selfies”。

× For example, I will send flowers to my parents when some special festival and I will send flowers to my classmate who has the birthday.

✓ For example, I will send flowers to my parents on some special festivals, and I will send flowers to my classmate who has a birthday.

“when some special festival”应改为“on some special festivals”表示在某些节日；“has the birthday”应改为“has a birthday”表示某人的生日。