Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и естественным. Следует избегать вопросов в ответе и использовать полные предложения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для плавности.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much because they are beautiful and charming. My favorite color of flowers is blue because it looks calm and peaceful.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует использовать связующие слова и уточнять, как именно цветы помогают расслабиться.

예시: Yes, many of my friends love flowers. They enjoy different kinds of flowers, and being around them helps me feel relaxed and calm.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения.

예시: Yes, my grandmother has a big house with a beautiful garden full of flowers. I love walking there because it is very peaceful and colorful.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более разнообразную лексику.

예시: Absolutely, I take photos of flowers every day on my way to school. Whenever I see beautiful flowers, I capture them with my phone because I really like them.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Следует использовать правильные времена и более четко выражать мысли.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to their loved ones. For example, my father frequently sends beautiful and colorful flowers to my mother and me, which I really appreciate.

× Of course I love flowers, they so beautiful and cute.

✓ Of course I love flowers, they are so beautiful and cute.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to link the subject 'they' with the adjectives 'beautiful and cute'. This is a common error where the verb 'to be' is omitted. To improve, always ensure that sentences have a proper verb linking the subject and its description.

× My favorite color of flowers? Blue.

✓ My favorite color of flowers is blue.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb, making it incomplete. To form a complete sentence, include the verb 'is' to connect the subject and the predicate. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My friends love flowers, they love many flowers and these flowers helps me stay relaxed.

✓ My friends love flowers, they love many flowers and these flowers help me stay relaxed.

The verb 'helps' does not agree with the plural subject 'flowers'. The correct verb form is 'help'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to pronoun reference. Always ensure verbs agree in number with their subjects.

× My grandma have a big house and a garden and this garden a lot of flowers.

✓ My grandma has a big house and a garden, and this garden has a lot of flowers.

The singular subject 'grandma' requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, the phrase 'this garden a lot of flowers' is missing the verb 'has'. Proper subject-verb agreement and complete sentence structure are necessary for clarity.

× I love walk in our garden because this so so beautiful.

✓ I love to walk in our garden because it is so, so beautiful.

The verb 'walk' needs the infinitive form 'to walk' after 'love'. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'it' as the subject referring to the garden, and the verb 'is' is missing. Correct use of verb forms and pronouns improves sentence correctness.

× I see flowers and I takes a photo on my phone.

✓ I see flowers and I take a photo on my phone.

The verb 'takes' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'take'. Ensuring subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× My father often sent flowers to my mom and me.

✓ My father often sends flowers to my mom and me.

The adverb 'often' indicates habitual action, which requires the present tense 'sends' rather than the past tense 'sent'. Using the correct tense to match the adverb improves sentence accuracy.

× My father seemed so beautiful, colorful flowers.

✓ My father sent such beautiful, colorful flowers.

The original sentence uses 'seemed' incorrectly and lacks clarity. The intended meaning is likely that the father sent beautiful flowers. Correcting the verb to 'sent' and adding 'such' clarifies the sentence and corrects the structure.