Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'I will'. Also, use correct grammar and structure. For example, say 'I love flowers and I would like to grow more in my garden because I enjoy taking care of them.'

예시: Yes, I love flowers and I would like to grow more in my garden because I enjoy taking care of them.

제안: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. For example, say 'Yes, many of my friends love flowers. For instance, when we visit parks, they often pick red flowers because they enjoy holding them and smiling.'

예시: Yes, many of my friends love flowers. For instance, when we visit parks, they often pick red flowers because they enjoy holding them and smiling.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid filler words. For example, say 'Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Many people have beautiful gardens, and there are also many wild flowers growing naturally. I enjoy growing different kinds of flowers myself.'

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Many people have beautiful gardens, and there are also many wild flowers growing naturally. I enjoy growing different kinds of flowers myself.

제안: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and correct word choice. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers like peach blossoms, sunflowers, and red flowers because I like their colors. Sometimes, I pick them and keep them in a vase at home.'

예시: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers like peach blossoms, sunflowers, and red flowers because I like their colors. Sometimes, I pick them and keep them in a vase at home.

제안: Make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding filler words and using linking words. For example, say 'Yes, in my country, it is very common to send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and engagements.'

예시: Yes, in my country, it is very common to send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and engagements.

× I am so into it.

✓ I am so into them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but 'flowers' is plural, so the correct pronoun should be 'them' to match the plural noun.

× I haven't so much flower in my own garden in my house, which I would love to, uh, prefer to grow this flower more and I'm a good taking care of it and like how to take care.

✓ I don't have many flowers in my own garden at my house, which I would love to grow more, and I'm good at taking care of them and know how to take care of them.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers. 'Haven't so much' is incorrect; 'don't have many' is appropriate for countable plural nouns. 'I'm a good taking care of it' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm good at taking care of them.' Also, 'like how to take care' is incomplete and corrected to 'know how to take care of them.'

× I have a lot of friends who do like to grow the flower and they keep loving flowers

✓ I have a lot of friends who like to grow flowers and they keep loving flowers.

'The flower' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'flowers' without 'the' because it refers to flowers in general.

× pluck up, pluck up the red flowers they like to have in their hands and smile and.

✓ pluck the red flowers they like to have in their hands and smile.

The phrasal verb 'pluck up' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'pluck' without 'up' when referring to picking flowers.

× the place I live in is there is so much flowers.

✓ The place I live in has so many flowers.

The phrase 'is there is' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'so much flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is countable; it should be 'so many flowers.'

× different people had a garden in those area with a such a beautiful flowers

✓ different people have gardens in those areas with such beautiful flowers

'Had' should be present tense 'have' to match the context. 'A garden' should be plural 'gardens' because it refers to multiple people. 'Those area' should be plural 'those areas.' 'A such a beautiful flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'such beautiful flowers' without 'a'.

× there's so much in nature's, umm, growing by peoples, uh, which is, uh, even I like it so much to grow different kind of flowers.

✓ there are so many flowers growing in nature by people, which I also like very much to grow different kinds of flowers.

'So much' should be 'so many' for countable nouns like flowers. 'In nature's' is incorrect; it should be 'in nature.' 'Growing by peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not take 's.' 'Different kind of flowers' should be plural 'different kinds of flowers.'

× when I usually see the beautiful flower specially the Peach flowers and the sunflower as well the red flowers.

✓ when I usually see beautiful flowers, especially peach flowers, sunflowers, and red flowers.

'The beautiful flower' should be plural 'beautiful flowers' to match the context. 'Peach flowers' and 'sunflower' should be consistent in plural form; 'sunflower' changed to 'sunflowers.'

× I take photo of them even I plug them and bring them to my home to keep in my flower can and as well I also liked it.

✓ I take photos of them; sometimes I pick them and bring them home to keep in my flower vase, and I also like it.

'Take photo of' should be 'take photos of.' 'Plug' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'pick' when referring to flowers. 'My home' is better as 'home.' 'Flower can' is incorrect; it should be 'flower vase.' 'Liked' should be present tense 'like' to match the context.

× everyone do like to send flowers to others especially on the occasional special occasion.

✓ everyone does like to send flowers to others, especially on special occasions.

'Do' should be 'does' to agree with singular subject 'everyone.' 'On the occasional special occasion' is awkward; better to say 'on special occasions.'

× if they want to give to someone on their birthday party, wedding, engagement party or greet for them to for the first time.

✓ if they want to give flowers to someone on their birthday, wedding, engagement party, or to greet them for the first time.

'Give to someone on their birthday party' is incorrect; it should be 'give flowers to someone on their birthday.' 'Greet for them to for the first time' is incorrect; it should be 'greet them for the first time.'