Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating 'love' and use correct verb forms. Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. Their sweet fragrance always makes me feel happy and calm. Whenever I smell them, I feel a special joy that is hard to describe.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Be specific and avoid vague phrases like 'sheep plants.' Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear details about your mother's love for flowers.

예시: Yes, many people I know love flowers, especially my mother. She has a beautiful garden with many different types of flowers. She spends a lot of time caring for them because she really enjoys gardening.

제안: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors, making it hard to understand. Try to use simpler sentences and correct word choices. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Actually, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in the city center. There is little space for gardening, but many people grow flowers on their rooftops instead.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many fillers and incomplete thoughts. Try to speak more fluently and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unnecessary fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life. However, when I visit my mother's large rooftop garden during my free time, I like to take pictures of the beautiful flowers there.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many pauses and unclear phrases. Try to give a direct answer with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. Flowers are seen as a symbol of love and appreciation.

× Flowers are things that everyone love it.

✓ Flowers are things that everyone loves.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'everyone' already implies the subject.

× Flowers are things that everyone love it.

✓ Flowers are things that everyone loves.

The pronoun 'it' is redundant and incorrect because 'everyone' is the subject and the verb already refers to it. Removing 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I love especially rose because that smell are so much sweet and when I feel it I cannot express my feelings because I really love it.

✓ I especially love roses because their smell is very sweet, and when I smell them, I cannot express my feelings because I really love them.

The adverb 'especially' should come before the verb 'love'. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match general statement. 'That smell are' is incorrect; 'smell' is singular and should be 'is'. 'So much sweet' is incorrect; 'very sweet' is appropriate. 'When I feel it' should be 'when I smell them' to refer to flowers. Pronouns should agree in number.

× that smell are so much sweet

✓ their smell is very sweet

The subject 'smell' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'so much sweet' is incorrect; 'very sweet' is the correct adverb-adjective combination.

× I love especially rose

✓ I especially love roses

The noun 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when speaking generally. Also, the adverb 'especially' should precede the verb 'love' for correct word order.

× most of the people love flowers

✓ most people love flowers

The phrase 'most of the people' is acceptable but 'most people' is more natural. The verb 'love' agrees with plural subject 'people'.

× especially my mother loves the flowers and she also make a garden with flowers.

✓ especially my mother loves flowers and she also makes a garden with flowers.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. The article 'the' before 'flowers' is unnecessary here.

× There are different type of flowers, sheep plants.

✓ There are different types of flowers, such as shrubs and plants.

'Type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'different'. 'Sheep plants' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'shrubs and plants' is a more appropriate phrase.

× There are different type of flowers, sheep plants.

✓ There are different types of flowers, such as shrubs and plants.

The preposition 'of' is correct after 'types', but the phrase needed correction for clarity and accuracy.

× most of the building are person who love to graduating their plants flower in rooftop.

✓ most of the building owners are people who love to grow their plants and flowers on rooftops.

'Building' should be plural or refer to 'building owners'. 'Are person' is incorrect; should be 'are people'. 'Love to graduating' is incorrect; should be 'love to grow'. 'Plants flower' is awkward; 'plants and flowers' is better. 'In rooftop' should be 'on rooftops'.

× most of the building are person who love to graduating their plants flower in rooftop.

✓ most of the building owners are people who love to grow their plants and flowers on rooftops.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for 'rooftop'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'rooftop' should be plural 'rooftops' to match general statement.

× when I am uh, free in my desert time, I visit the garden and always try to take photos because, umm, slab.

✓ when I am free in my leisure time, I visit the garden and always try to take photos because, umm, I like it.

'Desert time' is incorrect; likely meant 'leisure time'. 'Slab' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation; replaced with 'I like it' for clarity.

× flowers is a uh, symptoms of love is a symbol of uh.

✓ flowers are a symbol of love.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Symptoms' is incorrect; 'symbol' is the correct word. The sentence is simplified for clarity.