Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“grow love flowers”应为“grow flowers”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达。

예시: Yes, I love flowers. I grow some in my house. Every Valentine's Day, I give flowers to my mom and my girlfriend. For example, this year I gave my mom sunflowers, which symbolize warmth and gratitude.

제안: 回答中有多处发音和表达错误，如“flour”应为“flowers”，“9919 life”不清楚。建议使用简单清晰的句子，准确表达数字和文化含义。

예시: Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers. Every Valentine's Day, I give her 99 roses because in China, the number 99 symbolizes eternal love.

제안: 回答较长且重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I don't have many flowers at home because buying them is expensive. Also, growing flowers requires time and effort to take care of them.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，并清楚表达自己的习惯。

예시: No, I don't often take photos of flowers because I spend my weekends walking. However, I sometimes save flower pictures from the internet on my phone.

제안: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议用简洁句子直接回答问题，并举例说明。

예시: People in my country usually send flowers only on special occasions, such as graduations or when someone retires from work.

× I love flowers and I grow love flowers in my house.

✓ I love flowers and I grow flowers in my house.

这里“grow love flowers”中的“love”是多余的，应该去掉，保持名词复数形式“flowers”。

× Uh, every Valentine's Day I will give the flowers to my mom and my girlfriends.

✓ Uh, every Valentine's Day I give flowers to my mom and my girlfriends.

习惯性动作用一般现在时，不能用将来时“will give”。

× For example, this year I give my mom the sunflowers.

✓ For example, this year I gave my mom the sunflowers.

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式“gave”。

× That means, uh, mother life and uh, Thanksgiving.

✓ That means, uh, motherly love and, uh, thanksgiving.

“mother life”应为“motherly love”，形容词用法错误。

× My girlfriend loves a lot of flour, so every Valentine's Day I will give her 9919 life, uh, roses.

✓ My girlfriend loves a lot of flowers, so every Valentine's Day I give her 99 roses.

“flour”是面粉，应为“flowers”；“9919 life”无意义，应为“99 roses”。

× so every Valentine's Day I will give her 9919 life, uh, roses.

✓ so every Valentine's Day I give her 99 roses.

习惯性动作用一般现在时，不用将来时“will give”。

× and that because in the China, let's have a special specific means, uh, that means for that means lost forever.

✓ and that is because in China, it has a special specific meaning, uh, that means lost forever.

“in the China”应为“in China”；句子结构不完整，需补充“it has”。

× No, there's no flowers in my house because if you want to keep the flowers in your house, you have to pay, pay the money to the house store to, uh, to buy it.

✓ No, there are no flowers in my house because if you want to keep flowers in your house, you have to pay money to the flower shop to buy them.

“there's no flowers”应为“there are no flowers”，主谓一致；“house store”应为“flower shop”；“pay the money”简化为“pay money”；“buy it”改为“buy them”指代复数花。

× if you want to grow up in yourself, you have, you need to, you need to take up your free time to take care of it.

✓ if you want to grow flowers yourself, you need to take up your free time to take care of them.

“grow up in yourself”表达错误，应为“grow flowers yourself”；“take up your free time”正确；“take care of it”改为“take care of them”指代复数花。

× No, actually every weekend my free time taken up by the walks.

✓ No, actually every weekend my free time is taken up by walks.

被动语态缺少助动词“is”，且“walks”不加冠词。

× So I I will I have no chance to go to the nature environment to take the flowers pic picture.

✓ So I have no chance to go to the natural environment to take pictures of flowers.

“nature environment”应为“natural environment”；“pic picture”重复，应为“pictures”；去掉多余的“I”。

× But uh, I'm trying to trying to skin in the Internet and I will save it to my mobile phone.

✓ But uh, I'm trying to surf the Internet and I will save them to my mobile phone.

“trying to skin”错误，应为“trying to surf”；“it”改为“them”指代复数图片。

× Uh, actually, they don't, they all, they only send the flowers to each other in a very important festivals like the students graduated from school and, uh, uh, the, the employee that finish the work for a long time.

✓ Uh, actually, they don't; they only send flowers to each other on very important festivals like when students graduate from school and when employees finish working for a long time.

“send the flowers”改为“send flowers”；“in a very important festivals”应为“on very important festivals”；“the students graduated”改为“when students graduate”；“the employee that finish”改为“when employees finish”。

× So, so in China, uh, send others flowers have many.

✓ So, so in China, sending flowers to others is common.

原句结构混乱，需改为正确表达“送花很常见”。