Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用更自然的表达方式描述你喜欢的花和原因。

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. I enjoy growing sunflowers, lilies, and roses on my balcony because they brighten up my home and make me feel happy.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并具体描述你妈妈的花园。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She has a beautiful garden in my hometown filled with many kinds of flowers, which she takes care of every day.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子不连贯。建议用更清晰的句子表达城市中花卉较少的原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I live in a big city where there are not many flowers, but plenty of trees and bushes. I think flowers are harder to maintain, so the government might not invest much in planting them.

제안: 回答中时态和表达不准确，且有重复和停顿。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达拍摄花朵的习惯。

예시: Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers, I take photos of them with my phone to capture their colors and beauty.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和停顿。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并具体说明送花的场合和意义。

예시: Yes, sending flowers is very popular in China, especially during special occasions like the Spring Festival or birthdays, because flowers symbolize luck and romance.

× Of course, as a flower lovers, I'm quite fond of growing flowers at my balcony like, uh, sunflowers, lilies and and rose.

✓ Of course, as a flower lover, I'm quite fond of growing flowers on my balcony like sunflowers, lilies, and roses.

这里flower lovers是复数形式，但主语是单数I，应该用单数flower lover。balcony前应使用介词on。rose应使用复数roses，因为列举了多种花。

× Without the person who really love flower is my mom umm, she has her own garden in my hometown that filled the all kind the field of various flowers uh umm.

✓ The person who really loves flowers is my mom. She has her own garden in my hometown that is filled with all kinds of various flowers.

love应为第三人称单数形式loves。flower应为复数flowers。句子结构混乱，需拆分。filled后应加介词with。all kind应为all kinds。

× Now umm because I'm live in the big city and that not a lot of flowers nearby but a lot of umm trees and Bush, I think maybe flowers may hard to take care of it.

✓ Now, because I live in a big city, there are not a lot of flowers nearby but a lot of trees and bushes. I think maybe flowers are hard to take care of.

I'm live应为I live，去掉be动词。that not应改为there are not。Bush应为复数bushes。flowers后应加are。take care of后不需要it。

× So the government may did not invest much in it.

✓ So the government may not have invested much in it.

may did not是错误的时态搭配，应使用may not have + 过去分词表示过去可能没有做某事。

× Sure, every time I seen the beautiful flowers, I will take a photo.

✓ Sure, every time I see beautiful flowers, I take a photo.

seen是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时see。will take改为一般现在时take，因为every time表示习惯动作。

× I will use my cell phone, take a photo of it nearest, uh, seeing the, umm, colorful flowers in my, uh, phone.

✓ I will use my cell phone to take a close-up photo when I see colorful flowers on my phone.

take a photo of it nearest表达不清，应改为take a close-up photo。seeing应改为when I see。in my phone应为on my phone。

× Of course, sending flowers as a gift is quite popular in China, especially during some special at the uh, situation like Spring Festival or someone's birth date, uh, since the flower represent lucky and uh, romantic meanings.

✓ Of course, sending flowers as a gift is quite popular in China, especially during special occasions like the Spring Festival or someone's birthday, since flowers represent luck and romantic meanings.

during some special at the uh, situation表达不正确，应改为during special occasions。birth date应为birthday。flower应为复数flowers。lucky应为名词luck。