Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much, especially fresh ones like lilies, roses, and daisies. I remember when I was a child, my dad once brought home a big pot of wild daisies with bees flying around them.

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并避免重复填充词。

예시: Yes, when I was at university, my roommate really loved flowers because we lived in a house with a garden full of them. She often cut some beautiful branches and put them in a vase to decorate our room.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，避免重复和停顿，使用连贯的句子结构。

예시: Yes, our residential complex has a big garden with many different kinds of flowers. I enjoy walking there and appreciating the flowers, especially in spring.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达，注意时态和句子结构的正确使用。

예시: Yes, sometimes I take photos of beautiful flowers, especially in spring when the garden is full of freshly planted flowers. I can't help but take out my phone to capture them.

제안: 回答中存在重复和停顿，建议减少填充词，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, Mother's Day, or when visiting patients in the hospital.

× my dad bring home a big pot of wild Daisy with bees flying on on them.

✓ my dad brought home a big pot of wild daisies with bees flying on them.

这里“dad”是单数，动作发生在过去，动词应使用过去式“brought”。“wild Daisy”应为复数形式“wild daisies”，因为后面提到有多只蜜蜂飞在它们上面。

× my dad bring home a big pot of wild Daisy with bees flying on on them.

✓ my dad brought home a big pot of wild daisies with bees flying on them.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式“brought”，而不是现在式“bring”。

× the house was planted with flowers and she always cut off some branches with beautiful flowers in and put them in the vase and add.

✓ the house was planted with flowers and she always cut off some branches with beautiful flowers and put them in the vase.

“branches with beautiful flowers in”中的“in”多余，应去掉。

× the house was planted with flowers and she always cut off some branches with beautiful flowers in and put them in the vase and add.

✓ the house was planted with flowers and she always cut off some branches with beautiful flowers and put them in the vase.

“with beautiful flowers in”中的介词“in”使用不当，应删除。

× our residential complex umm, have a big garden and umm, with, with a lot of different kind of flowers

✓ our residential complex umm, has a big garden and umm, with a lot of different kinds of flowers

主语“complex”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。“different kind of flowers”应为复数“different kinds of flowers”。

× our residential complex umm, have a big garden

✓ our residential complex umm, has a big garden

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。

× I like to uh, walk in the garden and uh, appreciate the flowers, especially in.

✓ I like to uh, walk in the garden and uh, appreciate the flowers, especially in spring.

句子末尾“especially in”不完整，应补充完整的时间状语“especially in spring”。

× when I was in garden was groomed flowers, umm planted umm uh, I I can't help to take out my phone to to take some photos.

✓ when I was in the garden where flowers were groomed and planted, I couldn't help but take out my phone to take some photos.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态。“can't help to take”应改为“couldn't help but take”。

× People in our country often send flowers in some, umm, special, umm, days

✓ People in our country often send flowers on some special days

表示特定的“日子”时，介词应使用“on”，而不是“in”。

× even when on on the occasion of visiting a patient in hospital and Mother's Day as well.

✓ even on the occasion of visiting a patient in hospital and on Mother's Day as well.

“on”重复使用错误，应去掉多余的“on”，并且“Mother's Day”前也应加“on”。