Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a specific detail. Also, watch for grammar errors like 'flowers gives' which should be 'flowers give'.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they add a pleasant fragrance to the environment. For example, the lotus, which is India's national flower, is very special to me.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer clearly with linking words and avoid redundancy. Use correct verb forms and pronouns to make your answer natural and easy to understand.

예시: Yes, my close friend Deepasha loves flowers. She often brings flowers, like roses, to her classmate Deepanshu's birthday, and I admire how thoughtfully she gives them.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'empty flowers' and 'flowers and sun'. Try to use precise vocabulary and organize your answer logically with linking words. Also, check for grammar errors such as 'a green lush fields' which should be 'green lush fields'.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I live in a small town called Mahalana near Sonipat, which has green lush fields filled with various flowers like roses and lilies.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'but' properly and avoid awkward phrases like 'sand at pics'. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers because of my busy study schedule. However, last week I took some pictures of roses and sent them to my best friend to cheer him up.

제안: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using simpler and more natural expressions. Avoid repeating words like 'gesture' and try to explain the reason clearly with linking words.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because it is a way to show happiness and make the recipient feel special.

× Yes, I do love flowers because flowers gives us a fragrance which makes our atmosphere very good whereas Lotus is our national flower of our nation India and I love flowers also.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because flowers give us a fragrance which makes our atmosphere very good whereas Lotus is our national flower of our nation India and I love flowers also.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives' to agree in number. In English, plural subjects take base form verbs without 's' in the present tense.

× Yes I know my close friend Deepasha loves flowers as Deepasha also bring flowers when there is Deepanshu's birthday who is his classmate and I love the way she gives flowers and the she gives roses to her friend.

✓ Yes I know my close friend Deepasha loves flowers as Deepasha also brings flowers when it is Deepanshu's birthday who is her classmate and I love the way she gives flowers and she gives roses to her friend.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'Deepasha'. Also, 'there is Deepanshu's birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'it is Deepanshu's birthday'. Additionally, 'his classmate' should be 'her classmate' because Deepasha is female. The extra 'the' before 'she gives roses' is unnecessary and removed.

× Yes, there are empty flowers where I live.

✓ Yes, there are many flowers where I live.

The adjective 'empty' is incorrectly used to describe flowers. Flowers cannot be 'empty'. A more appropriate quantifier like 'many' fits the context better.

× There is a green lush fields as well as copious flowers and various variety of flowers that can be roses, Lily, flowers and sun.

✓ There are green lush fields as well as copious flowers and various varieties of flowers that can be roses, lilies, and sunflowers.

'Fields' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. 'Variety' should be plural 'varieties' to match 'various'. Also, 'Lily' should be plural 'lilies', and 'sun' is likely a mistake for 'sunflowers'.

× But last week I have taken few photos of roses and sand at pics to my best friend who is very close to me to make him happy.

✓ But last week I took a few photos of roses and sent the pics to my best friend who is very close to me to make him happy.

The phrase 'have taken' is less appropriate here; simple past 'took' fits better with 'last week'. 'Sand at pics' is incorrect; it should be 'sent the pics'. Also, 'few' should be 'a few' to indicate some photos.

× Yes I know my close friend Deepasha loves flowers as Deepasha also bring flowers when there is Deepanshu's birthday who is his classmate and I love the way she gives flowers and the she gives roses to her friend.

✓ Yes I know my close friend Deepasha loves flowers as Deepasha also brings flowers when it is Deepanshu's birthday who is her classmate and I love the way she gives flowers and she gives roses to her friend.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect because Deepasha is female, so it should be 'her'. Also, 'there is' should be 'it is' when referring to a specific event like a birthday.