Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa cụ thể, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "brightly colour" nên là "brightly coloured" hoặc "bright colors". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially brightly coloured ones because they brighten up my mood and make me feel happy. For instance, when I see red or yellow flowers, I feel more energetic and positive throughout the day.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "my mother have" nên là "my mother has" và "The she" không đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi chính tả như "see" thay vì "she". Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, my mother has green fingers. She usually spends hours watering and trimming flowers. Moreover, she sometimes takes pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý trật tự từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "People adhere usually grow" không đúng, nên là "People usually grow". Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "in front of the in front of houses". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: There are a lot of flowers in Hanoi. People usually grow flowers along the streets and in front of houses. For example, we can see jasmine and lotus flowers.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, ví dụ "I readily take photos" thay vì "I readily took photos". Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I have used 15" (15 gì?). Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I often take photos of flowers, but my mobile phone has only 64GB of storage, and I have already used 15GB, so the space is limited to store many photos.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "It's bring" nên là "It brings". Ngoài ra, "teacher days" nên là "Teacher's Day". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như "and and". Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn.

예시: In my country, people usually send flowers to others, especially on Valentine's Day and Teacher's Day. It brings happiness and brightens someone's mood.

× Yes, my mother have green fingers The she usually spend hours watering and trimming flowers.

✓ Yes, my mother has green fingers. She usually spends hours watering and trimming flowers.

The subject 'my mother' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'she' is singular, so the verb should be 'spends' instead of 'spend'. Additionally, the sentence had a typo 'The' which should be removed or replaced with a period to separate sentences.

× Moreover, see sometimes take pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.

✓ Moreover, she sometimes takes pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.

The pronoun 'see' is incorrect and should be 'she'. Also, 'she' is singular, so the verb should be 'takes' instead of 'take' (subject-verb agreement).

× People adhere usually grow flowers along the street and in front of the in front of houses.

✓ People usually grow flowers along the street and in front of houses.

The adverb 'usually' should come before the verb 'grow' for correct word order. The phrase 'in front of the in front of houses' is redundant; it should be 'in front of houses'. Also, 'adhere' is incorrect here and should be removed.

× For example, we can see Jasmine or Lotus.

✓ For example, we can see jasmine or lotus flowers.

'Jasmine' and 'Lotus' are types of flowers and should be in lowercase unless they are proper nouns. Also, adding 'flowers' clarifies the meaning and fits the plural context.

× I readily took photos of flowers because my mobile is about 64GB and I have used 15 so I think it's so limited to store any photos.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers because my mobile has about 64GB and I have used 15GB, so I think it's too limited to store many photos.

The verb 'took' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'take' is appropriate. 'My mobile is about 64GB' should be 'my mobile has about 64GB' to indicate capacity. 'I have used 15' is incomplete; it should specify '15GB'. 'So limited' should be 'too limited' and 'any photos' should be 'many photos' to express quantity correctly.

× In my country people usually send flowers to others especially in Valentine's Day and teacher days.

✓ In my country, people usually send flowers to others, especially on Valentine's Day and Teacher's Day.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to specific days. Also, 'teacher days' should be 'Teacher's Day' as it is a specific holiday. Commas are added for clarity.

× It's bring umm happiness, atmospheres and and brighten someone mood.

✓ It brings happiness, a good atmosphere, and brightens someone's mood.

'It's bring' is incorrect; it should be 'It brings' (third person singular). 'Atmospheres' is plural but should be singular 'atmosphere' here. 'Brighten' should be 'brightens' to agree with the singular subject. 'Someone mood' should be 'someone's mood' to show possession. Also, filler words like 'umm' and repeated 'and' should be removed.