Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. When I was a child, I often picked flowers like roses and tulips because I found them beautiful.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She enjoys picking roses and lilies because they smell wonderful and look elegant.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my home, such as roses and lilies. My mother enjoys picking and arranging them.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lặp từ và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. This makes me feel comfortable and happy.

제안: Câu trả lời có nội dung phù hợp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, in Vietnam, people often send flowers to friends as gifts, especially during important holidays like Tet or special occasions such as birthdays and weddings. Flowers are seen as beautiful and natural gifts.

× Yes, definitely I am a big fan of flowers when when I was a shy I often blend flowers just for example I like a rose or a swan.

✓ Yes, definitely I am a big fan of flowers. When I was shy, I often picked flowers. For example, I like a rose or a swan.

The sentence contains past tense errors such as 'blend' instead of 'picked' and awkward phrasing. 'Blend' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'picked'. Also, 'when I was a shy' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was shy'. The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, it's my mother. She really enjoy picking flowers and carrying it.

✓ Yes, it's my mother. She really enjoys picking flowers and carrying them.

The verb 'enjoy' must agree with the third person singular subject 'She', so it should be 'enjoys'. Also, 'carrying it' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them'.

× For example, I see a pick flowers like roses and lilies because they are and.

✓ For example, I see her pick flowers like roses and lilies because they are beautiful.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I see a pick flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'I see her pick flowers'. The phrase 'because they are and' is incomplete and needs a proper adjective to complete the thought.

× Yes, at my home there are a wide range of flowers, such as sources of lilies.

✓ Yes, at my home there is a wide range of flowers, such as roses and lilies.

The phrase 'sources of lilies' is incorrect; it should be 'roses and lilies'. Also, 'there are a wide range' is incorrect because 'a wide range' is singular, so it should be 'there is a wide range'.

× Shun flowers because my mother enjoy picking it, she often arrange it.

✓ She loves flowers because my mother enjoys picking them; she often arranges them.

'Shun flowers' is unclear and likely a typo for 'She loves flowers'. The verb 'enjoy' must be 'enjoys' to agree with 'my mother'. The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'flowers'; it should be 'them'. Also, 'arrange' should be 'arranges' to agree with 'she'.

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because it's very it's so beautiful and colorful.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because they are very beautiful and colorful.

The phrase 'it's very it's so beautiful' is redundant and incorrect. 'Flowers' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they are' instead of 'it is'.

× Umm this make me a sense of comfortable and happiness.

✓ Umm, this makes me feel comfortable and happy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical. 'Make me a sense of comfortable and happiness' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'makes me feel comfortable and happy'.

× Yes, Vietnamese people are friends and flowers to others as gifts, especially during important holidays like tested or special occasions such as birthdays and weddings.

✓ Yes, Vietnamese people send flowers to others as gifts, especially during important holidays like Tet or special occasions such as birthdays and weddings.

The phrase 'are friends and flowers' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is 'send flowers'. Also, 'tested' is a typo for 'Tet', a Vietnamese holiday.