Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to form a complete and coherent response with linking words.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they have beautiful meanings. Moreover, they look attractive and smell lovely, which always cheers me up.

제안: Your answer provides some details but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain your points more clearly. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar.

예시: Yes, one of my friends, Angela, loves sunflowers because they are edible and symbolise luxury and freedom. She says they represent sunshine and positive feelings.

제안: Your answer is descriptive but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, in the city where I live, there is a park full of flowers. Every spring, many bees visit, and the park is filled with the scent of flowers. It looks like an ocean of colourful blooms.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words and correct sentence structures.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. When I was younger, I thought only older people did that, but now I enjoy capturing these moments because it makes me feel peaceful and happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on answering the question directly with clear and coherent sentences. Avoid mixing unrelated ideas and use linking words appropriately.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others as gifts. Each flower has a special meaning and is connected to our traditions and beliefs. We also have national flowers that represent our culture.

× I think flower has good meanings and also has. Good looking and smells lovely.

✓ I think flowers have good meanings and also look good and smell lovely.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural verb 'have'. Also, 'has' is incorrect here; 'look' and 'smell' should be used to describe the flowers' appearance and scent. The sentence structure was fragmented and needed correction for clarity.

× One of my friends called Angela, she loves sunflowers so much because it's edible and also luxury, freedom.

✓ One of my friends called Angela loves sunflowers so much because they are edible and also represent luxury and freedom.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'sunflowers' which is plural; 'they' should be used. Also, 'luxury' and 'freedom' need to be connected properly to the subject; 'represent' is added for clarity.

× Yes, just in the city I live in there's a park full of flowers and every spring there's lots of bees and the whole park is full of flower smells.

✓ Yes, just in the city I live in there's a park full of flowers and every spring there are lots of bees and the whole park is full of flower smells.

The phrase 'there's lots of bees' is incorrect because 'lots of bees' is plural; the correct form is 'there are lots of bees' to agree in number.

× It's like a ocean of colorful flowers.

✓ It's like an ocean of colourful flowers.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'ocean'. Also, 'colourful' is the British English spelling, which fits the instruction to use English (United Kingdom).

× Yes, I do take photos of flowers in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I take photos of flowers in my daily life.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary here for affirmative statements; 'I take photos' is the correct simple present tense form.

× Well when I was young I thought that's what only old people do.

✓ Well, when I was young, I thought that was something only old people did.

The sentence needed commas for clarity. Also, 'that's what only old people do' is incorrect tense and structure; it should be past tense 'was something only old people did' to match 'when I was young'.

× Yes, we send photos to each other and we also give gifts It there's lots of meanings in all flowers in our country and beliefs and also we have country flowers and sometimes it's a good meaning and in flowers.

✓ Yes, we send flowers to each other and we also give gifts. There are lots of meanings in all flowers in our country and beliefs, and we also have national flowers which sometimes have good meanings.

The original sentence had 'send photos' instead of 'send flowers', which is likely a mistake. 'It there's' is incorrect; it should be 'There are' for plural 'meanings'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.