Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткую структуру. Следует избегать излишних повторов и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит более чётко сформулировать основную мысль и добавить конкретные детали.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially red roses. I often give them to my mom and sisters on their birthdays or on March 8th because I think flowers are a thoughtful and beautiful gift.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более точные слова, а также связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, including my grandmother and my colleagues. In my city, it is common for girls to receive flowers on their first date.

제안: Ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и согласование, а также более связно строить предложения.

예시: There are not many flowers where I live. I live in the southern part of Kazakhstan, which is mostly covered by mountains and fields. The only flowers available are those sold in the market.

제안: Ответ содержит много ошибок и непонятных слов, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и понятные выражения, избегать повторов и говорить чётко.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I see beautiful ones. I find them very beautiful and like to capture their colors and shapes.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать правильные выражения и грамматику, а также завершать мысли, чтобы ответ был полным и понятным.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day on February 14th and International Women's Day on March 8th. Flowers are a popular gift to show appreciation.

× Oh yeah, I know many people who loves flowers, starting with my grandmother and ending with my colleagues in my work.

✓ Oh yeah, I know many people who love flowers, starting with my grandmother and ending with my colleagues at my work.

The verb 'love' should agree with the plural subject 'people', so it should be 'love' instead of 'loves'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at my work' is more appropriate.

× ...and they requires them in the first data dating.

✓ ...and they require them on the first date of dating.

The verb 'require' should be plural to agree with 'they'. The phrase 'in the first data dating' is incorrect; it should be 'on the first date of dating' or better 'on the first date'.

× I live in Kazakhstan in the South side of the country and there are the fields which covers with the mountains and only flowers we have there are in the market.

✓ I live in Kazakhstan in the south side of the country, and there are fields covered by the mountains, and the only flowers we have there are in the market.

The phrase 'there are the fields which covers with the mountains' is incorrect. 'Fields' is plural, so the verb should be 'cover' or use 'covered by'. Also, 'south' should not be capitalized here.

× Yes, I do when I see beautiful pizzas uh in front of me or a son in front of the flower.

✓ Yes, I do when I see beautiful places in front of me or the sun in front of the flowers.

The words 'pizzas' and 'son' are incorrect here; likely intended 'places' and 'sun'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match context.

× Oh yeah, as far as I know myself, if people meet the goal, the goal wants a flower or if it's an 14th February or 8th March when it's an uh, governmental, uh, like girls day, they will give them the flowers and.

✓ Oh yeah, as far as I know, if people meet the goal, the goal wants a flower, or if it's the 14th of February or 8th of March, which is a governmental girls' day, they will give them flowers.

The phrase 'as far as I know myself' is incorrect; 'as far as I know' is correct. 'An 14th February' should be 'the 14th of February'. 'Girls day' should be 'girls' day' to show possession. Also, 'the flowers' is better as 'flowers' in this context.