Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如单数和复数不一致，且表达略显重复。建议注意名词单复数形式，避免重复表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially peonies, which are glamorous and gorgeous. In China, pale peonies symbolize wealth and success.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“lucky”应为“luck”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和词汇搭配，提升表达的准确性。

예시: My father also loves peonies because he believes they bring him luck in promoting his business.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，如“go off, go outside”重复且不自然，“goo”可能是口误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

예시: Definitely. My home is next to a natural park, so whenever I go outside or open the window, I can see many beautiful flowers.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“in a databases”，“helps me catching memory”等。建议注意名词单复数，动词形式，以及句子连贯性。

예시: I often take photos of flowers and save them in a database because it helps me capture memories. When I share these photos on social media, I usually get many likes and positive comments.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“Mother Day children's”。建议注意固定搭配和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

예시: Absolutely. People often send flowers on special occasions. For example, on Mother's Day, children usually give flowers to their mothers.

× Well, I'm a big fan of flower, especially Peony that is glamorous and gorgeous.

✓ Well, I'm a big fan of flowers, especially Peonies that are glamorous and gorgeous.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers，因为这里指的是花的种类或花朵的总称。Peony 作为花的名称，复数形式是 Peonies。谓语动词也要与复数主语保持一致，使用 are。

× My father also loves Peony because he believed that Peony can give him lucky to promote his business.

✓ My father also loves Peonies because he believes that Peonies can bring him luck to promote his business.

believed 应该用现在时 believes，因为句子描述的是一般事实。Peony 应用复数 Peonies。can give him lucky 中 lucky 应该用名词 luck。

× Well, definitely. My home is next to the natural park, so every time when I go off, go outside or open the window, I can see goo, I can see substantial gorgeous flowers.

✓ Well, definitely. My home is next to a natural park, so every time when I go out, go outside or open the window, I can see good, I can see substantial gorgeous flowers.

natural park 前缺少冠词 a。go off 用法不当，应改为 go out。goo 应为 good。

× I take photos of flower in a databases because it helps me catching memory and every time when I when I send photo of flowers in a social media I can get many likes and good comments.

✓ I take photos of flowers in a database because it helps me catch memories and every time when I send photos of flowers on social media I can get many likes and good comments.

flower 应用复数 flowers。databases 应为单数 database。catching memory 语法错误，应为 catch memories。send photo 应为 send photos。in a social media 应为 on social media。

× Absolutely yes, people are likely to send flowers with some special meaning days, for example, when Mother Day children's are likely to send flowers to their mother.

✓ Absolutely yes, people are likely to send flowers on some special meaningful days, for example, on Mother's Day children are likely to send flowers to their mother.

send flowers 的时间应使用介词 on。special meaning days 应改为 special meaningful days。Mother Day 应为 Mother's Day。children's 用法错误，应为 children。