Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答缺乏自然流畅性，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议用更自然的表达方式直接回答问题，并避免重复和模糊的表述。

예시: I don't have strong feelings about flowers; I neither love nor dislike them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my uncle really likes flowers. He often sends them to my grandparents, but I don't think they pay much attention to the flowers he sends.

제안: 回答不够具体且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题并提供具体细节，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, there aren't many flowers where I live. The area has a lot of grasslands and trees, but only a few flowers.

제안: 回答表达混乱且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用正确的语法表达。

예시: No, I rarely take photos, especially of flowers. Sometimes I take pictures of my friends, but not flowers.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议用连贯的句子表达对不同地区习惯的看法，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, people do send flowers in my country. However, in my hometown, it's not very common, but in Guangdong province, many people give flowers as gifts.

× I don't have any emotion of flower.

✓ I don't have any emotion about flowers.

这里flower应该用复数形式flowers，因为emotion是对花的总体感觉，而不是单一的花。

× my uncle really like flowers,

✓ my uncle really likes flowers,

主语是第三人称单数uncle，谓语动词like应加-s变为likes。

× he also send flowers to my grandma and grandpa

✓ he also sends flowers to my grandma and grandpa

主语he是第三人称单数，动词send应加-s变为sends。

× but I don't think my grandma and my grandpa like flowers he just don't pay attention to the flower he sent.

✓ but I don't think my grandma and my grandpa like flowers; he just doesn't pay attention to the flowers he sends.

flowers应为复数，flower也应为复数flowers；he和grandpa指代不清，建议分句；动词pay attention后面接介词to，flowers应为复数；动词send应为第三人称单数sends。

× Oh I really don't pay attention to the flowers in my living.

✓ Oh I really don't pay attention to the flowers where I live.

短语in my living不合适，应该用where I live表示“我住的地方”。

× but there are few hours flowers.

✓ but there are few flowers.

hours flowers是错误搭配，应为few flowers，表示“很少的花”。

× I barely don't take photos, especially photos of flowers.

✓ I rarely take photos, especially photos of flowers.

barely和don't连用不合适，barely表示几乎不，rarely更合适表达“很少拍照”。

× Sometimes I will take photos of my friends but at the ferry but take photos of flowers is very very low.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of my friends at the ferry, but taking photos of flowers is very rare.

句子结构混乱，使用but连接两部分时应清晰；take photos of flowers应改为taking photos of flowers作为主语；very very low表达不自然，改为very rare更合适。

× I often say I often say that many people gave flowers as gift to others.

✓ I often say that many people give flowers as gifts to others.

重复使用I often say；gave应为一般现在时give；gift应为复数gifts；as gift to others应为as gifts to others。