Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words and redundancy. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, instead of saying "I know it sounds, it doesn't sound unique," you could say "I know it's not unique." Additionally, clarify your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like "I love when the tree when the flowers bloom out."

예시: I absolutely love flowers, especially roses. I know it's not unique, but I prefer receiving them from someone rather than buying them myself because they are a wonderful way to express emotions. I also enjoy seeing flowers bloom on trees during spring.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes and making your sentences clearer. For example, say "My mom loves flowers" instead of "My mom loves flower." Also, avoid filler words like "uh." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: My mom loves flowers and is very passionate about gardening. She has a garden that she tends to with great care. She enjoys planting flowers and watching them grow and bloom.

제안: Focus on improving grammar and sentence structure. For example, say "I live in the suburbs where many people have their own gardens filled with various flowers and trees." Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and "umm." Use linking words like "however" appropriately to connect ideas.

예시: I live in the suburbs where many people have their own gardens filled with various flowers and trees. They usually take care of their plants by watering them regularly. However, recently there has been a water shortage, which has made it difficult for some people to maintain their gardens.

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say "I used to take photos of flowers a lot, but these days I don't have enough space on my phone." Avoid repeating phrases like "I insisted my sister." Also, use plural forms correctly, e.g., "various flowers."

예시: No, I don't take photos of flowers these days. I used to do it a lot, but now I don't have enough space on my phone. So, I ask my sister to take photos of the various flowers we see around the city.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using more precise vocabulary. For example, say "people often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like New Year." Avoid filler words like "umm" and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use plural forms correctly, e.g., "family members."

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like New Year. For instance, it is common to give flowers to all family members as a sign of respect and appreciation.

× I absolutely love flowers, especially rose.

✓ I absolutely love flowers, especially roses.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' because it refers to flowers in general, which is a plural concept here.

× My mom loves flower.

✓ My mom loves flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× So I live in suburb where many people have their own gardens, uh, filled with various flower and trees.

✓ So I live in a suburb where many people have their own gardens, uh, filled with various flowers and trees.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'various', which implies multiple items. Also, 'suburb' needs the article 'a' before it.

× So I live in suburb where many people have their own gardens, uh, filled with various flower and trees.

✓ So I live in a suburb where many people have their own gardens, uh, filled with various flowers and trees.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'various', which indicates multiple items. Also, 'suburb' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× So I insisted my sister, uh, I insisted that my sister take photo of the flowers because there is various flower in the city.

✓ So I insisted my sister, uh, I insisted that my sister take photos of the flowers because there are various flowers in the city.

The word 'photo' should be plural 'photos' because it refers to multiple pictures. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'various'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'.

× So I insisted my sister, uh, I insisted that my sister take photo of the flowers because there is various flower in the city.

✓ So I insisted my sister, uh, I insisted that my sister take photos of the flowers because there are various flowers in the city.

The phrase 'there is' should be 'there are' because the subject 'flowers' is plural.

× Yes, people in my country often send flower to other specially carrying a special occasion like umm New Year For instance, it is common to give flowers to all their uh family member as a sign of respect and appreciate.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like New Year. For instance, it is common to give flowers to all their family members as a sign of respect and appreciation.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers. 'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. 'Specially' should be 'especially' to mean particularly. 'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions' to match 'special'. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members' because it refers to multiple members. 'Appreciate' should be 'appreciation' as a noun to match 'sign of'.