Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“superstitious girls”应为“a superstitious girl”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复和不连贯的句子，同时注意主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially red roses. I believe they bring me good luck because I am a bit superstitious. Also, red roses symbolize simple romance, which I find very charming.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“most of people judge me are my peers”不合语法。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁明了的句子表达观点，避免复杂句式错误。

예시: I don't know many people who love flowers because most of my friends are busy with work and study. They don't have enough time to take care of flowers.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“flower flowers”，“appreciate appreciate”。建议注意用词准确，避免重复，并且句子结构要完整。

예시: Yes, many people plant flowers of different colors where I live. I feel very happy when I see them because they help me forget my worries.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“Flowers looks”应为“Flowers look”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are very beautiful. I usually use the blue sky as the background to highlight their vibrant colors.

제안: 回答内容较好，但“extend their attitude”表达不准确，建议使用“express their feelings”或“show their gratitude”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, on special occasions like Mother's Day, many children send flowers to their mothers to express their love and gratitude.

× Of course I like flowers, especially the red rose.

✓ Of course I like flowers, especially red roses.

这里“the red rose”应使用复数形式“red roses”，因为前面提到的是一般喜欢花，表示泛指多朵玫瑰花，使用单数不符合语境。

× As a superstitious girls, I think the red rose can bring me, can bring luck for me.

✓ As a superstitious girl, I think red roses can bring me luck.

“girls”应为单数“girl”，因为主语是“I”，表示自己是一个迷信的女孩；“the red rose”改为复数“red roses”，符合泛指；“can bring me, can bring luck for me”重复且不通顺，简化为“can bring me luck”。

× And it's simple romantic laughs.

✓ And it's simply romantic.

“simple romantic laughs”语法和表达错误，应改为副词“simply”修饰形容词“romantic”，表达“简单而浪漫”。

× Maybe not because most of people judge me are my peers who are busy with working and studying.

✓ Maybe not because most of the people around me are my peers who are busy working and studying.

“most of people”应为“most of the people”；“judge me”不合语境，应为“around me”；“busy with working”应为“busy working”，动词短语不需要介词“with”。

× They don't have sufficient time to to curated flowers.

✓ They don't have sufficient time to curate flowers.

“to to curated”重复且“curated”时态错误，应为动词原形“curate”跟在“to”后面。

× Sure, many people can plant flower flowers with with different colors.

✓ Sure, many people can plant flowers with different colors.

“flower flowers”重复，应去掉一个“flower”；“with with”重复，应去掉一个“with”。

× In my community, I feel totally delighted when appreciate appreciate them and I can forget the whole day sorrow.

✓ In my community, I feel totally delighted when I appreciate them, and I can forget the sorrow of the whole day.

“when appreciate appreciate them”缺少主语，应加“I”；“appreciate”重复；“the whole day sorrow”表达不自然，应改为“the sorrow of the whole day”。

× I always use the sky at the background, the blue sky and the various colors.

✓ I always use the sky as the background, the blue sky, and various colors.

“at the background”应为“as the background”；“the various colors”中“the”可去掉更自然。

× Flowers looks very beautiful.

✓ Flowers look very beautiful.

主语“Flowers”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“look”，而不是“looks”。

× Well, if there is a special day such as Mothers Day, many children will send a bunch of flowers to their mothers in order to extend their attitude or gratitude.

✓ Well, if there is a special day such as Mother's Day, many children will send a bunch of flowers to their mothers in order to express their affection or gratitude.

“Mothers Day”应为“Mother's Day”；“extend their attitude”表达错误，应为“express their affection”表示表达感情。