Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Probeer je antwoorden natuurlijker en duidelijker te maken door overbodige woorden en herhalingen te vermijden. Gebruik volledige zinnen en zorg voor correcte grammatica. Bijvoorbeeld, vermijd 'Uh' en zorg dat zinnen logisch en vloeiend zijn.

예시: Yes, I love flowers. My interest began with my grandmother, who was very passionate about them, especially pink and red varieties. Although I don't know their exact names, some had a strong scent that I didn't like.

제안: Let op grammaticale fouten en zorg dat je zinnen logisch en coherent zijn. Gebruik verbindingswoorden om je antwoord vloeiender te maken en vermijd onduidelijke uitdrukkingen zoals 'I can save my own'.

예시: Yes, as I mentioned, my grandmother loves flowers. Also, my aunt has more than 200 flowers in her house, and their scent fills every room, which is amazing.

제안: Probeer je zinnen korter en duidelijker te maken. Vermijd herhalingen en grammaticale fouten. Gebruik verbindingswoorden om je ideeën beter te verbinden en wees specifiek over wat je wilt zeggen.

예시: Not really. I don't have any flowers in my house, but I do have a garden. Although I'm not good at gardening, I want to plant some fragrant flowers soon.

제안: Vermijd herhalingen en vulwoorden zoals 'uh'. Maak je zinnen vloeiender en gebruik correcte woordvolgorde. Probeer ook specifieke voorbeelden te geven.

예시: Yes, I have taken photos of flowers a few times, especially tulip fields in the Netherlands, which are very famous. Also, whenever I find an attractive plant, tree, or flower, I like to photograph it.

제안: Let op grammatica en zinsstructuur. Gebruik volledige zinnen en verbindingswoorden om je antwoord duidelijker en natuurlijker te maken. Vermijd onduidelijke woorden zoals 'voluntary'.

예시: Yes, people often send flowers on anniversaries and special occasions. For example, it is common to send flowers to women who have just given birth. Flowers are also frequently given at weddings.

× They were scents was.

✓ They had a scent.

The original sentence uses 'scents' incorrectly as a verb and has a wrong verb form 'was'. The correct form is 'had a scent' to express possession of smell in past tense.

× my grandmother loves it also.

✓ my grandmother loves them also.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I can save my own.

✓ I can save my own flowers.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'flowers' clarifies the meaning and corrects the plural usage.

× My aunt has approximately more than 200 flowers in her house

✓ My aunt has more than 200 flowers in her house

Using both 'approximately' and 'more than' together is redundant. Choose one quantifier for clarity.

× they are sent are covering every room which is amazing.

✓ they are scenting every room which is amazing.

The phrase 'they are sent are covering' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that the flowers' scent fills the rooms, so 'they are scenting every room' is correct.

× I don't have any flower in my house

✓ I don't have any flowers in my house

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when used with 'any' to indicate zero quantity.

× I'm not good at at garden

✓ I'm not good at gardening

The phrase 'at at garden' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'good at gardening'.

× I don't do any gardening things.

✓ I don't do any gardening.

The word 'things' is unnecessary and awkward. 'Gardening' alone suffices as a gerund.

× especially the with a good sense.

✓ especially those with a good scent.

'The with a good sense' is incorrect. 'Those' refers to plural flowers and 'scent' is the correct noun for smell.

× Yes, actually I did it a few times, especially in the Tulip files in the Netherlands, which is really famous.

✓ Yes, actually I have done it a few times, especially in the tulip fields in the Netherlands, which are really famous.

Use present perfect 'have done' for experiences. 'Tulip files' is a typo; correct is 'tulip fields'. Also, 'fields' is plural, so 'are' is correct.

× if I find any, if I find attractive any, uh, plant, tree or flower, I do their photo.

✓ If I find any attractive plant, tree, or flower, I take their photo.

The adverb 'attractive' should directly modify the noun. 'Do their photo' is incorrect; 'take their photo' is correct.

× I do their photo. Yeah, I do take their photo.

✓ I take their photo. Yeah, I do take their photo.

'Do their photo' is incorrect; 'take their photo' is the correct expression.

× Yes they do that, especially in the anniversaries or special days.

✓ Yes, they do that, especially on anniversaries or special days.

Use 'on' with days and occasions. Also, 'the anniversaries' is incorrect; no article needed.

× if any women gave birth it's pretty common thing to send her like a bunch of flowers.

✓ If any woman gives birth, it's a pretty common thing to send her a bunch of flowers.

'Women' is plural; 'woman' is singular to match 'her'. Use present tense 'gives' for general truth. 'Like' is unnecessary.

× Also it's pretty common in weddings and voluntary.

✓ Also, it's pretty common at weddings and volunteer events.

Use 'at' for events. 'Voluntary' is an adjective; the noun 'volunteer events' or 'volunteering' is needed.