Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“not only to look them”应为“not only to look at them”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意介词使用，并避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I definitely love flowers. Not only do I enjoy looking at them, but I also like planting them. Planting flowers helps me relax and relieve stress, making me feel comfortable.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“she really love”应为“she really loves”，句子不连贯且表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She often plants and takes care of them at home. I remember when I was in primary school, she bought many flowers like roses and made them look healthy and beautiful.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“look flowers”应为“look at flowers”，且“there is a lady in my room”表达不明。建议使用准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my family and I love them. For example, my mother spends a lot of time patiently planting and taking care of flowers in our home.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复，如“take taking photos”。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because it helps me relax. The colors of flowers, like lilies and roses, are really beautiful. Moreover, photographing flowers makes me feel calm and happy.

제안: 回答中用词不准确，如“usual”应为“common”，且“supreme festival”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇，并具体说明节日名称。

예시: Yes, sending flowers is common in my country. People often send flowers to express their feelings. For example, during the Spring Festival, people give flowers to show their gratitude and happiness.

× Yes, I definitely love flowers, not only to look them and also I like planting them.

✓ Yes, I definitely love flowers, not only looking at them but also planting them.

动词后面接动名词形式时，应该用动词的 -ing 形式，而不是不定式。这里 'not only to look them' 应改为 'not only looking at them'，并且 'look' 后面需要加介词 'at'。

× not only to look them

✓ not only looking at them

动词 'look' 后面需要加介词 'at' 来表示看某物，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× not only to look them

✓ not only looking at them

动词 'look' 后面不能直接跟宾语代词 'them'，需要加介词 'at'，即 'look at them'。

× Firstly, planting flowers is a really nice experience when I want to release my pressure and relax to myself, which can also make me feel comfortable to.

✓ Firstly, planting flowers is a really nice experience when I want to release my pressure and relax myself, which can also make me feel comfortable.

动词 'relax' 后面不需要介词 'to'，且 'relax to myself' 是错误表达，应直接用 'relax myself'。

× she really love planting flowers look flowers in my home.

✓ she really loves planting flowers and looking at flowers in my home.

主语是第三人称单数 'she'，动词应加 -s，'love' 应改为 'loves'。另外，'look flowers' 应改为 'looking at flowers'。

× look flowers in my home

✓ looking at flowers in my home

动词 'look' 后面需要加介词 'at'，表示看某物。

× she bought many flowers to home and she planted them and make them looks healthy and beautiful like the Rose in my home.

✓ she bought many flowers home and she planted them and made them look healthy and beautiful like the roses in my home.

过去时态中，'make' 应改为 'made'，'looks' 应改为 'look'，且 'bought many flowers to home' 中 'to' 不需要，直接说 'bought many flowers home'。

× make them looks healthy and beautiful like the Rose in my home.

✓ make them look healthy and beautiful like the roses in my home.

'looks' 应为动词原形 'look'，因为前面有使役动词 'make'，后面接动词原形；'Rose' 应为复数 'roses'，因为指多朵花。

× bought many flowers to home

✓ bought many flowers home

动词 'buy' 后面直接加地点名词表示买回家，不需要介词 'to'。

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

此句无错误，复数 'flowers' 使用正确。

× so we really like to look flowers and planting them patiently.

✓ so we really like to look at flowers and plant them patiently.

动词 'look' 后需加介词 'at'，'planting' 应改为动词原形 'plant'，因为前面有 'like to'，后面接动词原形。

× so we really like to look flowers and planting them patiently.

✓ so we really like to look at flowers and plant them patiently.

'like to' 后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式。

× there is a lady in my room and my mother really loves it,

✓ there is a lady in my room and my mother really loves her,

'lady' 是人，应使用人称代词 'her'，而不是 'it'。

× my mother really loves it,

✓ my mother really loves her,

'lady' 是女性，应使用代词 'her'，而不是 'it'。

× Especially take taking photos of flowers.

✓ Especially taking photos of flowers.

重复使用 'take' 和 'taking' 是错误的，应只用 'taking'。

× the colors of flowers is really beautiful,

✓ the colors of flowers are really beautiful,

主语 'colors' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。

× I like Lily and the Rose

✓ I like lilies and roses

'Lily' 和 'Rose' 应使用复数形式 'lilies' 和 'roses'，表示喜欢多种花。

× People often use this way to convey their happiness and their emotion.

✓ People often use this way to convey their happiness and their emotions.

'emotion' 应为复数 'emotions'，表示多种情感。

× express their gratefulness.

✓ express their gratitude.

'gratefulness' 虽然是名词，但在此语境中更常用 'gratitude' 表达感谢之意。