Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, and it contains grammatical errors. To improve, provide a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid generalizations like "like all girls" and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up any space and have a pleasant fragrance. My mother was a florist, so I grew up surrounded by beautiful flower arrangements, which made me appreciate their beauty even more.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences and vocabulary errors (e.g., "girlfriend stuff"). To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid incomplete thoughts and be precise with vocabulary.

예시: Yes, many people I know love flowers, including my girlfriends, mother, uncle, and grandmothers. In Russia, flowers are very meaningful and are commonly given as gifts to women on special occasions.

제안: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. To improve, give a clear and direct response, then provide specific supporting details with proper linking words. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because Russia is a large country with diverse climates. For example, some regions have vast flower fields, while others have fewer flowers due to harsher weather conditions.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by breaking it into shorter sentences and using linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary details like the exact number of followers unless relevant.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when someone gives me a bouquet. I usually share these pictures on Instagram because I enjoy capturing their beauty and sharing it with my followers.

제안: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and contains grammatical errors. To improve, clarify your response by directly answering the question, then provide specific examples with linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary.

예시: People in my country do not often send flowers casually, but they commonly give flowers to women on special occasions such as International Women's Day on March 8th, birthdays, and Mother's Day.

× I think it's good gift for women

✓ I think it's a good gift for women

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'good gift'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× she often gave me beautiful flower arrangements which may

✓ she often gave me beautiful flower arrangements

The phrase 'which may' is incomplete and unclear in this context. Removing it corrects the sentence. Also, 'flower arrangements' is plural and correctly used here.

× all my girlfriend stuff

✓ all my girlfriends

'Girlfriend' should be plural to refer to multiple people. 'Stuff' is incorrect here as it refers to things, not people. The correct phrase is 'all my girlfriends'.

× my grandmas really enjoy flowers

✓ my grandmothers really enjoy flowers

'Grandmas' is informal but acceptable; however, 'grandmothers' is more appropriate in formal speech. The plural form is correct to refer to more than one grandmother.

× the flowers have big meaning

✓ the flowers have a big meaning

'Meaning' is a singular countable noun here and requires the article 'a' before 'big meaning' to be grammatically correct.

× it's good gift for girls

✓ it's a good gift for girls

As before, 'gift' is a singular countable noun and needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× We have flowers fields since Russia is so big

✓ We have flower fields since Russia is so big

'Flowers fields' is incorrect; the correct compound noun is 'flower fields' where 'flower' acts as an adjective describing 'fields'.

× in another region we have another flowers

✓ in another region we have other flowers

'Another' is used with singular nouns; with plural nouns like 'flowers', 'other' is the correct determiner.

× and really rarely flowers too

✓ and really rare flowers too

'Rarely' is an adverb and does not correctly modify 'flowers' here. The adjective 'rare' should be used to describe 'flowers'.

× When someone gives me a bucket of flowers

✓ When someone gives me a bouquet of flowers

'Bucket of flowers' is uncommon; the correct phrase is 'a bouquet of flowers' to describe a bunch of flowers given as a gift.

× share with my followers on Instagram

✓ share it with my followers on Instagram

The verb 'share' requires an object before the preposition 'with'. Adding 'it' clarifies what is being shared.

× people often give flowers to women in the other holidays

✓ people often give flowers to women on other holidays

'In the other holidays' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for holidays, and 'other' should not have 'the' before it in this context.

× for example 8th March birthday and mom's day too

✓ for example, International Women's Day on March 8th and Mother's Day too

'8th March birthday' is incorrect; the correct term is 'International Women's Day on March 8th'. Also, 'mom's day' should be 'Mother's Day'. Adding commas improves clarity.