Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“left my mood”应为“lift my mood”，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态和搭配，避免语法错误，同时可以丰富细节使回答更生动。

예시: Yes, I really love flowers, especially lilies and tulips. I appreciate their romantic meanings and beautiful fragrance. Whenever I see them, they always lift my mood and make me feel happy.

제안: 回答最后一句不完整，缺少谓语，导致表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，避免句子残缺，同时可以增加更多细节使回答更具体。

예시: Yes, definitely. My little sister is a big fan of flowers. She even has her own yard for gardening where she plants various kinds of flowers, such as sunflowers and roses. She really enjoys taking care of them every day.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“workers plants”应为“workers plant”，且表达略显重复。建议注意主谓一致，使用连词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

예시: Oh yes, there are many flowers near my home because there is a big new park nearby. In the park, workers plant various species of flowers, such as tulips and roses, especially in spring.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“photograph skill”应为“photography skills”，“that taken by those professional person”应为“taken by professional photographers”。建议注意名词复数和定语从句的正确使用。

예시: Yes, but not very often because I have poor photography skills. Instead, I often enjoy looking at pictures taken by professional photographers.

제안: 回答中“Volunteer festival”可能是错误表达，应为具体节日名称。建议使用准确的节日名称，并注意介词使用，如“buy a big bunch of roses for their girlfriends”。

예시: Oh yes, they do, especially on special festivals or occasions. For example, on Valentine's Day, many boys usually buy a big bunch of roses for their girlfriends to show their love.

× When I see them, they often left my mood.

✓ When I see them, they often lift my mood.

这里动词时态错误，原句中使用了过去式'left'，但句子描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时'lift'。

× She really.

✓ She really loves flowers.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构错误。需要补充谓语动词使句子完整。

× there is a big new park nearby my home.

✓ there is a big new park near my home.

介词使用错误，'nearby'通常作副词使用，修饰动词或句子，作介词时应使用'near'。

× workers plants tulips and roses in spring.

✓ workers plant tulips and roses in spring.

主语'workers'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'plant'，而不是单数'plants'。

× I have a poor photograph skill.

✓ I have poor photography skills.

'photograph skill'用法不当，应该用复数'skills'表示技能，且'photography'更合适作为形容词修饰'skills'。

× I often enjoy appreciating the picture that taken by those professional person.

✓ I often enjoy appreciating the pictures taken by those professional people.

缺少关系代词'that are'，且'person'应为复数'people'，'picture'应为复数'pictures'，以匹配上下文。

× many boys usually buy a big bunch of roses to their girlfriends to show their love.

✓ many boys usually buy a big bunch of roses for their girlfriends to show their love.

动词'buy'后面应接介词'for'表示为某人买东西，'to'用法错误。