Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để ý nghĩa được truyền đạt chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize love and happiness. My favorite flowers are roses, especially red ones, as red is my favorite color.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ và sử dụng đại từ phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, my grandmother really loves flowers because she wants to plant them around our house. She also enjoys giving flowers to others because it makes her happy.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'soy'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: No, there are not many flowers in my area because there isn't much space to plant them. However, you can visit flower shops where there are many flowers available to buy for decorating your home.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp và cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers. However, on special occasions, I buy flowers like orchids or roses to take pictures with them, which makes my photos more beautiful and memorable.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi chính tả và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, especially on birthdays or Women's Day. Flowers symbolize love, beauty, and happiness.

× Yes I really like flowers because flower is simple for love and happiness.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers because flowers are simple symbols of love and happiness.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural subject 'flowers' and the verb 'are' to agree with the plural noun. Also, 'simple for love and happiness' is unclear; 'simple symbols of love and happiness' is more appropriate.

× Mostly roses and is had my favorite color is red so flower in my.

✓ Mostly roses, and my favorite color is red, so flowers are my favorite.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs proper subject-verb agreement and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, my grandmother really love flowers because she want to plant flowers around my house and she like giving flower for each other because it can make she happy.

✓ Yes, my grandmother really loves flowers because she wants to plant flowers around my house and she likes giving flowers to others because it can make her happy.

The verbs 'love', 'want', and 'like' need to be in third person singular form 'loves', 'wants', and 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'my grandmother'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'for each other' should be 'to others'. 'Make she happy' should be 'make her happy'.

× No, because in my area don't have much, uh, soy to plant flowers.

✓ No, because in my area there isn't much soil to plant flowers.

The sentence lacks the correct 'there is/are' structure. 'Don't have' is incorrect here; it should be 'there isn't'. Also, 'soy' is a typo and should be 'soil'.

× However, you can go to the flower shop where it has a lot of flowers and you can buy to decorate your house.

✓ However, you can go to the flower shop where there are a lot of flowers and you can buy them to decorate your house.

The phrase 'where it has' is incorrect; it should be 'where there are' to indicate existence. Also, 'buy to decorate' is incomplete; 'buy them to decorate' is clearer.

× No, not really. Uh. However, on my special occasion I will buy a bunch of flower like orchids or roses to take photo with these flowers.

✓ No, not really. However, on special occasions, I buy a bunch of flowers like orchids or roses to take photos with them.

'On my special occasion' should be plural 'on special occasions' for general statements. 'Will buy' is changed to 'buy' to indicate habitual action. 'A bunch of flower' should be 'a bunch of flowers'. 'Take photo' should be plural 'take photos' and 'with these flowers' is better as 'with them'.

× This can make my photo more remarkable and beautiful and moral foods can.

✓ This can make my photos more remarkable and beautiful.

The phrase 'and moral foods can' is unclear and seems unrelated; it should be removed. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'more remarkable and beautiful'.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other mostly on their birthday or woman day.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, mostly on their birthdays or Women's Day.

'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'people'. 'Woman day' is incorrect; the correct term is 'Women's Day'.

× Is can simple for love, beauty and hap happiness and.

✓ It can simply represent love, beauty, and happiness.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Is can simple for' is incorrect; it should be 'It can simply represent'. 'Hap happiness and' is a typo and should be 'happiness'.