Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam karışıklıkları var. Cümleniz çok uzun ve karmaşık, bu da doğal ve etkili iletişimi engelliyor. Daha kısa ve doğrudan cümleler kurarak, konuyu net ifade edin. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsal hataları azaltmalısınız.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much because they brighten up any room and make me feel happy. However, my boyfriend doesn't understand this and rarely buys me flowers, which makes me a bit upset.

제안: Cümleniz karmaşık ve bazı kelime kullanımları yanlış. Daha açık ve basit cümleler kurarak, düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümleler arasında mantıklı geçişler yapmalısınız.

예시: I don't know many people who like giving or receiving flowers. However, my mother especially enjoys getting flowers from me.

제안: Cümleniz anlam açısından belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha basit ve doğrudan ifadeler kullanarak, soruya net cevap verin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolaylı anlatımları azaltın.

예시: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in a big city called Ismesh, and there are few flower shops around.

제안: Cümleniz karışık ve bazı ifadeler anlamsal olarak uygun değil. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurarak, düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve dilbilgisi hatalarını azaltmalısınız.

예시: I usually hesitate to take photos because of a childhood experience. My mother used to take photos of everything, including me, and she often asked me to take her photo.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı kelime seçimleri ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha uygun kelimeler kullanarak ve cümleleri daha akıcı hale getirerek ifadenizi geliştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other because they are kind and want to make others happy. Sending flowers is a common way to show love and affection.

× Despite loving flowers and admiring them unfortunately by my boyfriend don't and doesn't understand it and keep keeps on not buying me some flowers and I'm so upset for it because I think I have deserve to get flowers and they're so pretty cool.

✓ Despite loving flowers and admiring them, unfortunately my boyfriend doesn't understand it and keeps not buying me any flowers, and I'm so upset about it because I think I deserve to get flowers and they're so pretty and cool.

The errors include incorrect use of 'don't and doesn't' together, which is redundant; 'keep keeps' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'boyfriend'; 'have deserve' should be 'deserve' as 'have' is unnecessary here; 'some flowers' is better as 'any flowers' in negative sentences; and missing commas for clarity. The corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and proper verb forms.

× Apparently I'm not surrounded by the people who likes to receiving flowers or give and buying flowers, but uh, I think however they are in eager and not reluctant, reluctant to get flowers when I get them, for example, particularly my mothers.

✓ Apparently I'm not surrounded by people who like receiving flowers or giving and buying flowers, but I think they are eager and not reluctant to get flowers when I get them, for example, particularly my mother.

The pronoun 'the people who likes' should be 'people who like' to match plural subject; 'to receiving' should be 'receiving' without 'to'; 'give and buying' should be parallel as 'giving and buying'; 'my mothers' should be singular 'my mother' unless referring to multiple mothers. These corrections fix pronoun and verb form errors.

× Seemingly no one can assert that I am surrounded by many flowers. Or the person persons, uh, who umm, sell flowers because I live in a big city, Uh, who names Ismesh and there's no flowers?

✓ Seemingly no one can assert that I am surrounded by many flowers or by the people who sell flowers because I live in a big city called Ismesh and there are no flowers.

'Person persons' is incorrect; should be 'people'; 'there's no flowers' should be 'there are no flowers' to agree with plural noun; 'who names Ismesh' should be 'called Ismesh'. These corrections address singular/plural and article usage.

× I have a strong hesitant for taking photos because of my childhood trauma I think which is very funny and hilarious.

✓ I have a strong hesitation about taking photos because of my childhood trauma, which I think is very funny and hilarious.

'Hesitant' is an adjective, but a noun is needed here; 'hesitation' is correct. Also, 'for taking photos' should be 'about taking photos'. These corrections fix quantifier and preposition usage.

× My mother was always taking everything photos photos of everything like me her and she asked me to get it to take her photos me.

✓ My mother was always taking photos of everything, like me and her, and she asked me to take her photos.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect pronoun order. 'Photos photos' is repeated; 'like me her' should be 'like me and her'; 'asked me to get it to take her photos me' is confusing and corrected to 'asked me to take her photos'. These corrections clarify pronoun use and sentence structure.

× Yes, I think it's it's feasible. And because in my country people's are always so kind to each other and so naive and they love to getting others some flowers and make them happy.

✓ Yes, I think it's feasible because in my country people are always so kind to each other and so naive, and they love giving others flowers to make them happy.

'People's' is incorrect possessive; should be 'people'; 'love to getting' should be 'love giving'; 'some flowers' is better as 'flowers' here. These corrections fix quantifier and pronoun errors.