Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples using correct grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially white roses. I find them elegant and they have a pleasant fragrance that I really enjoy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Provide a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb, and add some details to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She spends a lot of time planting and taking care of them.

제안: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to connect your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my house because my mother loves gardening. She has planted various kinds of flowers in our big yard.

제안: Your answer is too long and contains unclear expressions like 'makes my gallery smelly.' Use clear and natural phrases, and organize your answer with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. It relaxes me and brightens up my photo gallery.

제안: Your answer is clear, well-structured, and provides specific examples. To improve further, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more engaging.

예시: Yes, in my country, people frequently send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. Flowers symbolize emotions such as love and gratitude. For instance, sending red roses on Valentine's Day is a popular way to express affection.

× Yes, I love flower.

✓ Yes, I love flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the speaker is talking about flowers in general, not a single flower.

× I love specially rose flower in a white colors.

✓ I especially love rose flowers in white color.

The adverb 'especially' should come before the verb 'love'. 'Rose flower' should be plural 'rose flowers' or simply 'roses'. 'Colors' should be singular 'color' because 'white' is a single color.

× That's it. That's it. Because it.

✓ That's it because I like them.

The sentence 'Because it.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the previous sentence to explain the reason.

× Yes, I know good good loves flower.

✓ Yes, I know people who love flowers.

The phrase 'good good loves flower' is incorrect. It should be 'people who love flowers' to make sense and correct plural usage.

× Yes, I have a lot of flowers in my house.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of flowers in my house.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× My mother loves planting, so she's grown so much flowers.

✓ My mother loves planting, so she's grown so many flowers.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'flowers' is countable, so 'many' should be used.

× India are small. Big yard, huh?

✓ India has a small, big yard, huh?

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Possibly intended to say 'In India, there is a small big yard' or 'My house in India has a small, big yard.' Also, 'India are' is incorrect; 'India is' is correct.

× Yes, I very much like to click the photos of the flowers because I found it relaxing and they're beautiful and makes my gallery smelly.

✓ Yes, I really like to take photos of flowers because I find it relaxing and they are beautiful and make my gallery colorful.

'Very much like' is better expressed as 'really like'. 'Click the photos' is informal; 'take photos' is better. 'Found' should be present tense 'find' to match 'like'. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'they'. 'Smelly' is incorrect in this context; 'colorful' fits better.

× Make my gallery smelly, full of colours and I found it joy when I click the photos of flower.

✓ They make my gallery full of colors, and I find joy when I take photos of flowers.

'Make' should agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Smelly' is incorrect; 'full of colors' is appropriate. 'Found' should be 'find' to maintain present tense. 'Click the photos of flower' should be 'take photos of flowers'.