Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), use correct noun forms and verb agreement, and give one specific supporting detail. For example, say which flower you like and why in one or two sentences, using linking words if needed.

예시: Yes, I love roses because they smell wonderful and brighten my mood. For instance, after a long day at work, the scent of roses helps me relax and feel more cheerful.

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and specificity. Use a clear topic sentence naming the person, correct verb forms, and specific details about what she does. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "in summer" or "every year."

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She grows many varieties around our home and every summer we replant and add new species so the garden always looks bright.

제안: Make your response coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a direct answer, then give specific, logical details. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words like "also" or "for example."

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, my neighbor grows colorful roses and has a large flower garden, and many houses plant small native flowers along the street.

제안: Be precise and correct vocabulary. Use correct tense and word choice (e.g., "sometimes", "bloom", "garden") and keep to 2–3 sentences. Explain briefly why you take photos with a clear linking phrase like "because" or "so that."

예시: I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when a new bloom opens in my mother's garden. I like capturing their bright colors and shapes because the pictures help me remember special moments.

제안: Use correct grammar and clearer examples. Answer directly, then give 1–2 specific occasions when flowers are sent, using correct nouns and prepositions. Avoid unclear words like "oceans" or "at all."

예시: Yes, people often send flowers as gifts for special occasions such as birthdays, weddings and anniversaries. For example, I sometimes send a bouquet of a new variety to a friend on their birthday.

× Yes, absolutely I love uh rose because it have a good smell and it give me sheer up uh, after a long uh day.

✓ Yes, absolutely I love roses because they have a good smell and they cheer me up after a long day.

Multiple pronoun and noun agreement errors: 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when speaking generally; 'it have' is wrong because plural subject needs 'have'; use 'they' to refer to plural 'roses'; 'give me sheer up' has wrong verb and word order and spelling — correct phrase is 'cheer me up'. Also remove filler sounds for clarity. Suggestion: ensure noun-number agreement and match pronouns and verbs to singular/plural subjects. ID: 1 and 12 and 27

× My mother quite like it. She grows grows around our home.

✓ My mother quite likes them. She grows them around our home.

Subject-verb agreement: 'My mother' requires third person singular verb form 'likes' not 'like'. Pronoun reference: 'it' is ambiguous — use 'them' to refer to multiple flowers. Also 'grows grows' is a repetition error; keep single 'grows'. Suggestion: ensure verbs match the subject and pronouns clearly refer to the noun. ID: 2 and 12 and 27

× Every summer we replant and edit a new versatile so that ground always look bright and.

✓ Every summer we replant and plant new varieties so that the ground always looks bright.

Several problems: 'edit a new versatile' is incorrect word choice — likely intended 'plant new varieties'. Missing article 'the' before 'ground' and subject-verb agreement 'ground looks' (singular ground needs 'looks'). Sentence ended abruptly and had extra conjunction. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('plant', 'varieties') and include articles and correct verb forms to complete the sentence. ID: 26 and 11 and 27 and 13

× Yes, there are a lot flower where I love my neighbor grows colorful rose and hair garden, and we were also blends small flower and nature rose a lot that bath the bath.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live. My neighbor grows colorful roses in her garden, and we also plant many small flowers and native roses around the path.

Many errors: 'a lot flower' should be 'a lot of flowers' (quantifier + plural noun). 'where I love' should be 'where I live' (typo). 'colorful rose' pluralize to 'colorful roses'; 'hair garden' likely 'her garden'. 'we were also blends' wrong tense and verb — use 'we also plant' or 'we also have'. 'small flower' -> 'small flowers'. 'nature rose' -> 'native roses' or 'wild roses'. 'that bath the bath' is unclear; replaced with likely intended 'around the path'. Suggestion: correct plural forms, prepositions, and choose appropriate verbs and nouns. ID: 1 and 5 and 11 and 26

× I do sometime take photo for flowers specially when a new plum opens and my mother garden.

✓ I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when a new bloom opens in my mother's garden.

Adverb placement and word forms: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (frequency adverb). 'take photo' should be 'take photos' or 'take a photo' for count noun agreement. Preposition should be 'of' not 'for'. 'specially' should be 'especially'. 'plum' likely typo for 'bloom'. 'my mother garden' needs possessive: 'my mother's garden'. Suggestion: use correct adverb forms, pluralize count nouns, correct prepositions, and possessives. ID: 8 and 11 and 13 and 1

× I enjoy capitaling their bright colors and dictate shapes because it helped me remember beautiful mom.

✓ I enjoy capturing their bright colors and delicate shapes because it helps me remember beautiful moments.

Many wrong word choices: 'capitaling' is not a word — likely 'capturing'. 'dictate shapes' should be 'delicate shapes'. Tense and subject agreement: 'it helped me' shifts past tense; keep present 'it helps me' to match 'I enjoy'. 'beautiful mom' unclear — likely 'beautiful moments'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary and maintain consistent verb tenses. ID: 13 and 6 and 26

× Yes, people were often send the flower as a gift for specially oceans like birthday or wedding or when sometime at all.

✓ Yes, people often send flowers as gifts for special occasions like birthdays or weddings, or sometimes for other events.

Tense and auxiliary misuse: 'were often send' is incorrect; use simple present 'often send'. Article and plural: 'the flower' should be 'flowers' when speaking generally. 'specially oceans' should be 'special occasions'. 'birthday or wedding' pluralized to 'birthdays or weddings'. Suggestion: use correct tense (present simple for habitual actions), plural nouns for general statements, and correct collocations ('special occasions'). ID: 5 and 1 and 11 and 13

× For example I sometime send a new type for bloom to my friend.

✓ For example, I sometimes send a new type of bloom to my friend.

Adverb form: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Preposition: use 'of' in 'type of bloom'. Article use: 'a new type of bloom' is acceptable; ensure pluralizing if talking generally. Also include comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: correct adverb form and prepositions for clearer phrases. ID: 8 and 11 and 22