Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct plural and article use, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a brief reason with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers and roses. My favourite is the rose because of its bright colours; for example, I like yellow roses most. I also find sunflowers cheerful and uplifting.

제안: Clarify who you mean and use correct pronouns and simple, accurate descriptions. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers. Give one supporting detail with a linking word to explain how they show their love.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. For instance, she grows many roses and sunflowers on our balcony, so we always have fresh blooms at home.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and correct sentence structure. Avoid repetition and be specific about the place. Use linking words like "for example" and correct nouns (e.g., "market" or "flower stall").

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, a nearby garden and local flower markets have roses, sunflowers and water lilies, and people can buy bouquets easily.

제안: Answer directly, use correct verb tenses and reduce repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "so", "because") and keep to 2–3 sentences. Be specific about frequency and the effect photos have on you.

예시: Not every day, but when I see a flower that catches my eye I take a photo and keep it on my phone. Later, when I feel down, I look at those pictures because they cheer me up and help me relax.

제안: Make the response clearer and correct word choices. State a general statement, then give specific occasions using correct terms (e.g., weddings, funerals, festivals). Avoid unclear words like "invading" or "loss of flowers".

예시: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions. For example, bouquets are common at weddings and festivals, and flowers are also used for funerals and public celebrations.

× Yes, I like flowers, especially the sunflower and rose.

✓ Yes, I like flowers, especially sunflowers and roses.

Countable nouns used generally should be plural when talking about types or categories. Use 'sunflowers and roses' instead of 'the sunflower and rose' to refer to flowers in general.

× Rose is my favorite because of the color.

✓ Roses are my favorite because of their colors.

When referring to a category (roses) use the plural. Also use a plural possessive adjective 'their' to agree with plural noun and 'colors' if referring to multiple colors.

× There are uh, variety of color rose that are red, pink, yellow and my most favorite is yellow.

✓ There are a variety of colored roses that are red, pink, and yellow, and my favorite is yellow.

Use the article 'a' with 'variety', change 'color rose' to 'colored roses' and make punctuation and conjunctions consistent. 'My most favorite' is redundant; use 'my favorite'.

× Yes, my mother also loves flowers and for the reason we have it and for that reason he he plays UH-22 Tub of Flower Rose in our balcony.

✓ Yes, my mother also loves flowers, so we have them on our balcony and she arranges tubs of roses there.

Use 'so' or 'for that reason' to connect clauses. 'Have it' should be 'have them' to agree with plural 'flowers'. 'Plays' is incorrect context; use 'arranges' or 'puts'. 'In our balcony' should be 'on our balcony'.

× Yes, the area where I live there are golden area where where we can find lots of flowers.

✓ Yes, the area where I live has large green spaces where we can find lots of flowers.

Avoid repeating 'area'. Use singular 'has' with 'the area' (subject-verb agreement) and choose accurate adjectives ('golden area' is unclear) and correct word order.

× Rose, sunflower, water Lily, many types of flowers are there and if anyone wants they can also purchase the flower tab of flower from there.

✓ Roses, sunflowers, water lilies and many other types of flowers are there, and if anyone wants, they can also purchase flower tubs there.

Make plant names plural and capitalize consistently ('water lily' -> 'water lilies'). 'Tab of flower' seems to mean 'tub of flowers'—use 'tub' and plural 'flowers'. Add commas for clarity.

× Not every time, but if I find any new flower which which just catch my eye, that time I take the pictures of that flower and keep it with me.

✓ Not every time, but if I find a new flower that just catches my eye, I take pictures of it and keep them with me.

Use 'a' with singular 'flower', change 'which' to 'that' for defining clauses, use 'catches' for third-person singular, use 'take pictures' (no 'the') and ensure pronoun agreement ('it' and 'them').

× Whenever I'm not feeling good or I'm in out of my mind, that time I just watched the pictures and my mood suddenly change and I'm feeling refreshed.

✓ Whenever I'm not feeling well or I'm upset, I just look at the pictures and my mood suddenly changes and I feel refreshed.

Use 'feeling well' not 'feeling good' in this context, 'in out of my mind' is incorrect—use 'upset' or 'not myself'. Use present simple 'look' and 'changes' for habitual actions, and 'I feel refreshed' for present state.

× Yes, mainly in the varying occasions people used to take the bouquet for the bride and groom and they celebrate the occasion with the flowers and also invading.

✓ Yes, mainly on various occasions people give bouquets to the bride and groom and decorate with flowers to celebrate.

Use 'on various occasions' not 'in the varying occasions'. 'People used to take the bouquet' is incorrect here; use 'people give bouquets'. Remove unclear 'also invading' and replace with 'decorate with flowers'.

× We can see that the decoration happened with the loss of flowers.

✓ We can see that the decorations are made with lots of flowers.

'Loss of flowers' is incorrect; likely intended 'lots of flowers'. Fix sentence structure and verb tense: 'decorations are made with' is natural English.