Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I love flowers. Roses and jasmine are my favorites because they have a wonderful fragrance and vivid colours that lift my mood. For example, the scent of jasmine in the evening helps me relax after a long day.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and tense. Use linking words (because, and) to connect reasons, and give one specific example rather than many hesitations.

예시: Yes, my mother and sister love flowers. My mother plants flowering trees and waters her garden every morning, which keeps it full of blooms, and my sister often wears fresh flowers in her hair at family celebrations.

제안: Answer directly and improve sentence structure: use one clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Avoid fillers and ensure plural/singular agreement.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother keeps a garden in our courtyard. It contains jasmine, roses and tuberose, all of which fill the air with strong fragrance and bright colours.

제안: Respond directly, remove hesitations, and use consistent tense. Give specific details about frequency and purpose, and link ideas clearly (for example, because/so).

예시: Yes, I often photograph flowers in the early morning when dewdrops make them look fresh. I usually post these photos on my Instagram story to share the beauty with friends.

제안: Start with a clear statement about how common it is, then give specific examples and a brief explanation. Use correct adverbs (often/occasionally) and reduce filler words.

예시: People in my country often give flowers on special occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays. For example, many people give roses when proposing because roses are a common symbol of love.

× Yes, I love flowers with great fragrance especially rose and Jasmine are my favorite flowers because it's very beautiful and vibrant.

✓ Yes, I love flowers with great fragrance. Especially roses and jasmine are my favorite flowers because they are very beautiful and vibrant.

The sentence uses 'it's' which incorrectly refers to plural 'roses and jasmine'; use plural pronoun 'they'. Also 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when listing favorites. Split into two sentences for clarity and subject-verb agreement.'

× Colors make a mood lift and it make refreshing mind for us.

✓ Colors lift my mood and make my mind feel refreshed.

Original has unnatural word order and incorrect pronoun 'it' referring to 'colors' (plural). Use correct verb agreement 'make' and natural adjectives/adverbs: 'lift my mood' and 'feel refreshed'.

× Is my mom and sister is flower lovers because my mom love to plant a flowering trees and uh, small plants in her garden and she always uh, watering flowering garden and my sister love to wear flowers in her head in some occasions.

✓ My mom and sister are flower lovers because my mom loves to plant flowering trees and small plants in her garden, and she always waters the flowering garden. My sister likes to wear flowers in her hair on some occasions.

Several pronoun and agreement errors: 'Is' at start is incorrect; use declarative 'My mom and sister are'. Subject-verb agreement: 'mom love' -> 'mom loves'; 'watering' should be base verb 'waters' with subject she. 'Flowering trees' is countable plural so remove 'a'. 'Wear flowers in her head' is unnatural; use 'in her hair'. Also add articles 'the' where needed and split into two sentences for clarity.'

× As my mom had a garden in my courtyard and there are lot of flowering plants like Jasmine, roses and pathmani etcetera.

✓ My mom has a garden in my courtyard, and there are a lot of flowering plants like jasmine, roses and pathmani.

Tense and article issues: use present 'has' to match ongoing situation. 'There are lot' needs the article 'a' -> 'a lot'. Capitalization: common nouns like 'jasmine' should be lowercase. Remove 'etcetera' for conciseness.'

× These are uh with great fragrance and vibrant colours.

✓ They have a great fragrance and vibrant colours.

Pronoun 'These are with' is awkward; use 'They have' to indicate possession. Keep consistent plurality and natural collocation 'have a great fragrance'.

× Your daily life? Yeah is I usually take photos of flowers in early morning with the presence of dewdrops and the atmosphere was very cold.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of flowers in the early morning when there are dewdrops and the atmosphere is very cool.

Remove 'Your daily life? Yeah is' which is ungrammatical and irrelevant. Use present habitual 'I usually take'. Use 'in the early morning' and 'when there are dewdrops' (there + plural). Use 'is very cool' rather than past 'was' to describe typical condition. 'Cool' preferred over 'cold' for typical mornings.'

× Then I will post it into my social media handling like Instagram story and WhatsApp stories.

✓ Then I post them on my social media accounts, like Instagram stories and WhatsApp status.

Use present simple 'I post' for habitual actions rather than future 'I will post'. 'It' should be 'them' referring to photos (plural). Preposition 'on' is standard for posting 'on social media', and 'Instagram stories' and 'WhatsApp status' are the correct collocations.'

× Is people in my country occasionally send flowers as gift in some occasions like wedding anniversary, birthdays and also proposing someone by giving roses.

✓ People in my country occasionally send flowers as gifts on occasions like wedding anniversaries, birthdays, and when proposing to someone with roses.

Remove erroneous initial 'Is'. Use correct verb agreement 'send' with plural 'people'. Use plural 'gifts' and correct preposition 'on occasions'. 'Proposing someone' should be 'proposing to someone'. Improve parallel structure and pluralization.'

× Uh because roses are symbol of love and it will convey their feelings.

✓ Roses are a symbol of love and convey people's feelings.

Use article 'a' before 'symbol of love'. Replace 'it will convey their feelings' with 'convey people's feelings' to match plural subject 'roses' and general truth; avoid future 'will' for general statement.'