Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on clarity and accuracy: use correct words (flower, not flour), speak in complete sentences, and answer directly. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like flowers, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I don't really love flowers. I prefer giving practical gifts because they last longer and can be used, such as chocolates or small souvenirs. For example, I usually give my friends a box of chocolates when I visit, because it is more useful than flowers.

제안: Be concise and organized: answer directly, then give a clear supporting detail with linking words (for example, however, because). Use correct grammar (e.g., ‘my partner loves looking at flowers’) and avoid vague phrasing. Give one specific example of a friend or type of flower they like.

예시: Yes, my partner loves flowers and often enjoys visiting botanical gardens. However, I still prefer practical gifts because flowers wilt quickly; for instance, he likes roses, so I sometimes buy him a small potted plant that lasts longer.

제안: Improve coherence and accurate vocabulary: respond with a clear topic sentence about how common flowers are locally, then add one or two specific observations using linking words (for example, for example, because). Correct mistakes (e.g., ‘when I walk in my area’ instead of ‘walk in my diary’). Keep sentences simple and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers in my neighborhood, especially in neighbors' gardens and along the streets. For example, when I walk past the park, I often see colorful roses and marigolds, which I find relaxing to look at.

제안: Answer directly and give a specific habit or frequency: say whether you take photos and how often, then add a brief reason with linking words (for example, because, so). Use correct collocations (e.g., ‘take photos of flowers’, ‘I find them relaxing’). Avoid repeating ideas.

예시: Not often, but I sometimes take photos of flowers when I see an interesting color or pattern. For example, I take pictures on weekends in the park because the flowers have vivid colors that I find calming.

제안: Be structured and specific: start with a clear general statement, then provide two concrete occasions when people send flowers, using linking words (for example, such as, for example). Use correct phrases (e.g., ‘when visiting someone in hospital’, ‘on special occasions like Valentine’s Day’). Keep it concise and avoid hesitations.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions. For example, it is common to bring flowers when visiting someone in hospital and to give roses on Valentine’s Day.

× Well, I don't have flour, but I also not really into, uh, flour.

✓ Well, I don't have flowers, but I'm also not really into flowers.

Original uses 'flour' instead of 'flowers' and omits auxiliary verb for negative present continuous/ state. Use 'I'm not really into' or 'I am not really into' to form correct negative with verb 'to be'. Also correct noun to plural 'flowers' for general reference.

× I don't, I don't usually get dipped for flour, but I also normally I rarely give someone flour cigarette, but I always prefer giving out something more practical.

✓ I don't usually get given flowers, and I rarely give someone a bouquet, but I always prefer giving something more practical.

Several errors: verb form and voice. 'Get dipped for' is incorrect; likely intended 'get given'. Use passive 'get given' for receiving. 'Flour cigarette' seems to be 'flower' or 'bouquet'; use 'a bouquet' or 'flowers'. Remove redundant adverbs 'also normally I rarely'. Ensure third-person singular verbs (not applicable here) and article use 'a bouquet'.

× So that chocolate or any, any souvenir that I can keep it inside.

✓ So chocolate or any souvenir that I can keep.

Redundant pronoun 'it' after relative clause is incorrect. Remove 'it inside' and simplify to 'that I can keep'. Also article 'that chocolate' changed to 'So chocolate' or 'So, chocolate' depending on context.

× Yes, my partner, he really loved looking at the flower.

✓ Yes, my partner — he really loves looking at flowers.

Tense and number: 'loved' is past tense but context implies general habit, so use present 'loves'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' for general reference. Also keep third-person singular verb agreement 'loves' with 'he'.

× But in my experience there's some flower I really hard to look up for even though they look really beautiful in terms of present, presenting the really beautiful, but I always prefer something.

✓ But in my experience there are some flowers that I find hard to look at, even though they are really beautiful; I still prefer something else.

Multiple errors: 'there's' should be plural 'there are' for 'some flowers' (singular/plural issue). 'I really hard to look up for' is ungrammatical — use 'I find hard to look at'. Pronoun agreement 'they' refers to 'flowers' so ensure plural verbs 'are'. Simplify redundant phrasing 'in terms of present, presenting the really beautiful' to 'they are really beautiful'. End with clear preference 'I still prefer something else'.

× Well, may the neighbor have lost a plant flower when as I walk in my diary, enjoy looking at the variety of flowers by the collar and the sand that they offer to humans.

✓ Well, many neighbors have lots of potted plants, and when I walk in my area I enjoy looking at the variety of flowers by the collars and borders that they offer.

Many errors: 'may the neighbor have lost' unclear — likely 'many neighbors have lots'. 'Plant flower' -> 'potted plants' or 'flowering plants'. 'Walk in my diary' should be 'walk in my area' or 'neighborhood'. 'By the collar and the sand' unclear; perhaps 'by the collars and borders' or 'in their gardens'. Fix prepositions: 'in my area', 'by the borders'.

× So they look when I was have a look at them.

✓ So when I look at them, I feel relaxed and I find them colorful.

Tense and pronoun confusion: 'they look when I was have a look at them' is incorrect. Use present simple 'when I look at them' and express feeling 'I feel relaxed'. 'Relaxing' -> 'relaxed' to describe speaker's state.

× So I not really like flower, but I do enjoy looking at flowers.

✓ So I don't really like flowers, but I do enjoy looking at them.

Missing auxiliary verb 'do' for negative 'don't'. Use plural 'flowers' for general statement. Replace repetition with pronoun 'them' to avoid redundancy.

× Well, I don't really like flowers but I do enjoy watching them occasionally because of the things in the flower and the powerful that they have.

✓ Well, I don't really like flowers, but I do enjoy looking at them occasionally because of the details and the power they have.

Use 'looking at' rather than 'watching' for flowers; 'things in the flower' is vague — 'details' or 'colors' is better. 'The powerful' is incorrect — use 'the power' or 'their beauty'. Maintain plural agreement 'they have'.

× So there are many variety of flower really beautiful to me and I I find it very relaxing when watching it occasionally.

✓ There are many varieties of flowers that are really beautiful to me, and I find looking at them occasionally very relaxing.

Number agreement: 'many variety' should be 'many varieties' (singular/plural issue). 'flower' -> 'flowers'. 'I I' remove duplicate. 'find it very relaxing when watching it' incorrect pronoun/gerund use — use 'find looking at them very relaxing'.

× Well, in my country, people do, uh, give flowers as a gift occasionally, such as when you see visiting someone in the hospitals or you, uh, or on the big occasion, just that, umm, modern day and, uh, Valentine's Day, we do, we do give flowers, uh, at the operation appreciation and just.

✓ Well, in my country, people do give flowers as gifts occasionally, such as when visiting someone in the hospital or on special occasions like Mother's Day and Valentine's Day; we give flowers to show appreciation.

Preposition and article issues: 'in the hospitals' should be 'in the hospital' for visiting someone. 'On the big occasion' -> 'on special occasions'. 'Modern day' likely 'Mother's Day'. 'At the operation appreciation' unclear; use 'to show appreciation'. Make 'flowers as gifts' plural and fluid phrasing.