Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
I adore writing. I have even written a poem consisting of 30 lines which is called The Life in a Row, so it is one of my main hobbies. I ride every day and I'm never tired of it.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
Mostly I write poems on the topic of love because at the age of 18 I truly don't understand the meaning of love and by writing some poems I want to know what love means to myself and it helps me to express my opinion and develop my thinking.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
As I'm getting older and I'm gaining new wisdom, new knowledge every day, I think things that I write will change, but not very well because I still have the same mindset I had five or ten years ago. That's why, yeah, maybe topic can change.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
As I work in Itisphere, typing for me is the very easy type of writing. Handwriting is time consuming and as I don't have so much time, I prefer typing more than handwriting. Also it is very easy to copy, delete something if there is mistakes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 65.0제안: Ответ должен быть более сфокусирован на вопросе и избегать лишней информации. Например, упоминание о езде не связано с письмом и создает путаницу. Следует использовать связующие слова для плавности и логичности.
예시: Yes, I write quite often because I really enjoy it. For instance, I have written a 30-line poem called 'The Life in a Row,' which is one of my favorite hobbies.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 75.0제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и ясность, используя связующие слова и более точные формулировки. Также стоит избегать повторов и сделать ответ более естественным.
예시: I mostly write poems about love because, at 18, I am still trying to understand its meaning. Writing helps me express my feelings and develop my thoughts on this complex topic.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 60.0제안: Ответ немного запутан и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более четкую структуру и связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ логичным и понятным.
예시: I believe my writing will change as I grow older and gain more knowledge. However, my mindset remains similar to before, so while the topics might evolve, my style may stay consistent.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 70.0제안: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но можно улучшить связность и грамматику. Следует избегать повторов и использовать более естественные выражения.
예시: Since I work at Itisphere, typing is easier for me than handwriting. It saves time and allows me to easily correct mistakes, so I definitely prefer typing.
문법
× Mostly I write poems on the topic of love because at the age of 18 I truly don't understand the meaning of love and by writing some poems I want to know what love means to myself and it helps me to express my opinion and develop my thinking.
✓ Mostly I write poems on the topic of love because at the age of 18 I truly didn't understand the meaning of love and by writing some poems I want to know what love means to me and it helps me to express my opinion and develop my thinking.
The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the speaker refers to being 18 in the past, 'don't understand' should be 'didn't understand' to match past time. Also, 'means to myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'means to me'. This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× Also it is very easy to copy, delete something if there is mistakes.
✓ Also it is very easy to copy, delete something if there are mistakes.
The phrase 'there is mistakes' is incorrect because 'mistakes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue with singular and plural forms.
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