Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but you need to avoid repeating words and make your sentences clearer. Try to speak naturally and keep your answer concise, not more than 5 sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially when I have free time. Writing and reading come easily to me. For instance, when I was in school, I often wrote notes and stories to practice my skills.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reasons. Also, distinguish between fiction and non-fiction correctly.

예시: I enjoy writing stories because they allow me to create mental pictures. I especially like writing both fiction and non-fiction, as they help me express and interpret my own ideas.

제안: Try to avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' properly to explain your ideas. Also, make your examples clearer and more specific.

예시: Yes, the things I write can change because of my personal feelings or thoughts. For example, when I was in college, I sometimes changed my story from being about a man to being about an animal.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make elicit something'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Also, try to correct grammar mistakes.

예시: I prefer handwriting rather than typing because it is easier for me to make corrections. Also, I am more comfortable with handwriting since I am not used to using a keyboard.

× writing and reading are are easier for me

✓ writing and reading are easier for me

The repetition of 'are' is a typographical error. Removing the extra 'are' corrects the sentence structure.

× It is thing I I love to be doing especially when I'm less busy

✓ It is a thing I love to be doing especially when I'm less busy

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'thing' to indicate a singular noun. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× when when I was in in school I always write many things down

✓ when I was in school I always wrote many things down

The verb 'write' should be in the past tense 'wrote' to match the past time reference 'when I was in school'. Also, repeated words 'when' and 'in' are typographical errors and should be removed.

× I like to be writing a story to create a mental picture about the things I especially I love to be writing in fiction and not fiction story

✓ I like writing stories to create a mental picture about things; especially, I love writing fiction and nonfiction stories

The phrase 'like to be writing' is awkward; 'like writing' is more natural. Also, 'fiction and not fiction story' should be 'fiction and nonfiction stories' for clarity and correctness.

× So where I will create and I will interpret my own idea into it

✓ So I will create and interpret my own ideas into it

'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match the context of multiple thoughts being interpreted. Also, 'So where' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× Yes, it can be change

✓ Yes, it can change

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'change', not the passive form 'be change'.

× it has happened to me when I was, uh, in college

✓ it happened to me when I was in college

The present perfect 'has happened' is less appropriate with a specific past time 'when I was in college'; simple past 'happened' is correct.

× So where I feel, I feel like writing about a man was little change to of writing about an animal

✓ I felt like writing about a man changed a little to writing about an animal

The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past context. The phrase 'was little change to of writing' is incorrect and should be rephrased for clarity.

× I prefer writing with my hand rather than with a keyboard Cos it is easier for me to make a correction and to make elicit something that has happened in my are handwriting so I don't use to a keyboard

✓ I prefer writing by hand rather than using a keyboard because it is easier for me to make corrections and to elicit something that has happened in my handwriting, so I don't use a keyboard

The phrase 'writing with my hand' should be 'writing by hand'. 'Make a correction' should be plural 'make corrections'. 'Make elicit' is incorrect; 'elicit' is a verb meaning to draw out, so 'to elicit something' is correct. 'In my are handwriting' is a typographical error and should be 'in my handwriting'. 'I don't use to a keyboard' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't use a keyboard'.