Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で、意味が通じにくい部分があります。例えば、「I ride a lot」は「I write a lot」の誤りと思われます。また、冗長な表現や文法の誤りが多く、内容が明確に伝わっていません。より簡潔で正確な英語表現を心がけ、文法ミスを減らすことが重要です。

예시: Yes, I write a lot because my university requires us to complete many writing assignments. Currently, I am focusing on improving my English essay writing skills.

제안: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「my imagination and creativity of develops」は正しくありません。また、内容がやや曖昧で、具体的な理由や詳細が不足しています。より正確な文法を使い、理由を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: I like to write novels because it helps me develop my imagination and creativity. Writing stories allows me to express my thoughts and reflect on different ideas.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I tend to write the fiction the fiction」や「Now I try to write that things to」は不自然です。文章を簡潔にし、正しい時制と語彙を使う練習が必要です。

예시: Yes, the things I write have changed. When I was young, I used to write fiction, but now I try to write more realistic stories.

제안: 表現が繰り返されており、文法的にも不自然です。例えば、「doesn't make me to feel I am writing that I'm writing」は誤りです。理由を明確にし、簡潔で正しい文法を使うことを意識しましょう。

예시: I prefer handwriting because typing doesn't give me the same feeling of actually writing. Writing by hand helps me focus better.

× Yes, I ride a lot.

✓ Yes, I write a lot.

The student mistakenly used 'ride' instead of 'write'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects the meaning. The correct verb is 'write' to answer the question about writing.

× my university forced students to write a lot.

✓ my university forces students to write a lot.

The sentence refers to a current or habitual situation, so the present tense 'forces' is appropriate instead of past tense 'forced'. Modal verb usage is related to tense and modality here.

× So that's why I have a lot of opportunity to write to writing something.

✓ So that's why I have a lot of opportunities to write something.

'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' because 'a lot of' is used with countable plural nouns. Also, 'to write to writing something' is incorrect; it should be 'to write something'.

× Especially now I'm trying hard to write English essay.

✓ Especially now I'm trying hard to write English essays.

'English essay' should be plural 'English essays' to match the context of multiple essays. Also, 'trying hard to write' is correct usage of verb + -ing form.

× I like to write novel.

✓ I like to write novels.

'Novel' should be plural 'novels' because the student is talking about writing in general, not a single novel.

× my imagination and creativity of develops and it connects to it and and by doing that I can reflect.

✓ my imagination and creativity develop and connect to it, and by doing that I can reflect.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'and and' and incorrect verb forms 'develops' instead of 'develop'. The verbs should agree with the plural subject 'imagination and creativity'.

× I think my the thing I write is changing currently.

✓ I think the things I write are changing currently.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the plural verb 'are changing'. Also, 'my the' is redundant; 'the' alone is sufficient.

× when I was young I tend to write the fiction the fiction.

✓ when I was young I tended to write fiction.

The past tense 'tended' should be used to match 'when I was young'. Also, 'the fiction the fiction' is repetitive and incorrect; 'fiction' without 'the' is correct.

× However, now I am trying to write.

✓ However, now I am trying to write.

This sentence is correct in present continuous tense to describe current action.

× Now I try to write that things to.

✓ Now I try to write those things too.

'That things' is incorrect; it should be 'those things' to indicate plural and demonstrative pronoun agreement. Also, 'to' should be 'too' meaning 'also'.

× For me, I prefer to write by my hand because if I because typing doesn't make me to doesn't make me to feel I am writing that I'm writing.

✓ For me, I prefer to write by hand because typing doesn't make me feel like I am writing.

'By my hand' should be 'by hand' as the correct prepositional phrase. The sentence has redundancy and incorrect modal verb usage 'make me to'. Also, 'feel I am writing that I'm writing' is awkward and redundant.

× Therefore I prefer to write by my hands.

✓ Therefore I prefer to write by hand.

'By my hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by hand' regardless of singular or plural.