Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“read”应为“write”，“convene”用词错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议加强基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免用词错误。

예시: Yes, I often write down my feelings and thoughts on WeChat or QQ. I think it's a good way to express what I'm thinking.

제안: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰，如“command of a food”表达错误，重复词汇“listen listen”，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构，避免重复。

예시: I like to write about food reviews and my feelings after watching movies or listening to songs. It helps me share my thoughts with others.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“what what”，语法错误如“when I feeling change”，表达不够自然。建议注意语法时态和主谓一致，避免重复。

예시: Yes, what I write depends on my feelings. When my feelings change, the things I write also change.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“my head writing. Is really figure?”不明所以。建议使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点，避免无意义的词汇。

예시: I prefer typing because it is very convenient. Handwriting is slower and sometimes hard to read.

× Yes, I often read lots of my feelings and thoughts in my WeChat or my QQ.

✓ Yes, I often write lots of my feelings and thoughts on my WeChat or QQ.

这里动词用错了，题目问的是写作习惯，应该用write（写）而不是read（读）。另外，介词用on更合适。

× I think is a good way to convene what I'm thinking about.

✓ I think it is a good way to convey what I'm thinking about.

句子缺少主语it，且单词convene用错，应为convey（传达）。

× I like to write lots of things such as the command of a food and feelings after I watch a movie or I listen listen your song.

✓ I like to write lots of things such as comments on food and feelings after I watch a movie or listen to your song.

command应为comments，且food前不加冠词a，listen后应加介词to。

× I think it's a good way to interact myself with others people.

✓ I think it's a good way to interact with other people.

interact是及物动词，不需要反身代词myself，others people应为other people。

× Yes, what what I read depends on how I feel about it.

✓ Yes, what I write depends on how I feel about it.

重复what what，应删除一个；read应改为write，符合上下文。

× When I feeling change, the things which I write will change.

✓ When my feelings change, the things which I write will change.

feeling应为复数形式feelings，且缺少所有格my。

× I prefer typing. I think typing is super convenient. Handwriting is terrible. My head writing. Is really figure?

✓ I prefer typing. I think typing is very convenient. Handwriting is terrible. My handwriting is really bad.

head writing应为handwriting，句子断裂且用词错误，figure用错，应为bad或其他形容词。