Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 좀 더 간결하고 명확하게 답변을 구성하며, 문법적 오류를 줄이고 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I am a student. I often write reports and exam answers, especially related to my major during the semester.

제안: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 덧붙여 문장을 완성하세요.

예시: I like to write about my experiments because it helps me record accurate information and results for future reference.

제안: 답변은 적절하지만, 연결어 사용과 문장 구조를 개선하여 더 자연스럽고 논리적으로 만드세요.

예시: Yes, the things I write have changed because as I grow older, my broader perspective and experiences influence my writing style and content.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현을 수정하고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: It depends on the situation. I usually type when writing long texts, but I prefer handwriting for short memos or simple notes.

× So during the university semester I usually write down for my major.

✓ So during the university semester I usually write for my major.

The verb 'write' should not be followed by 'down' in this context because 'write down' means to jot something quickly, but here the student means to write as part of their major coursework. Removing 'down' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Well, I like to write my experimental.

✓ Well, I like to write my experiments.

The word 'experimental' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun. The correct noun form is 'experiments' to refer to the things being written about.

× Experimental efforts require me to exactly write them.

✓ Experimental efforts require me to write about them exactly.

The adverb 'exactly' is misplaced. It should modify 'write' and be placed after the verb phrase. Also, 'write them' is unclear; 'write about them' clarifies the meaning.

× Write information.

✓ I write information.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject. Adding 'I' completes the sentence.

× Yes, I think the things I write have changed.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write have changed.

No correction needed; the sentence correctly uses present tense to express a current opinion about past changes.

× Umm. This is because as I grow up, so my broadened perspective and experience can influence my writing.

✓ Umm. This is because as I grow up, my broadened perspective and experience can influence my writing.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing 'so' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× If I have to write long scripts I usually use typing, but if I write down short memo or simple text I usually write down on paper.

✓ If I have to write long scripts, I usually type, but if I write short memos or simple texts, I usually write on paper.

'Typing' should be replaced with the verb 'type'. 'Write down' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Memo' and 'text' should be pluralized to 'memos' and 'texts' to match the context. Also, commas are added for clarity.