Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。

예시: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I am doing my tutorial questions. I usually write my calculations and answers either in a booklet or on a tablet.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达有语法和用词错误。建议明确表达喜欢写什么，并用具体例子支持，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: Most of the time, I write assignments or answer questions. Sometimes, I also keep a diary because it helps me remember my emotions during special occasions, like attending memorable ceremonies.

제안: 回答较好，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，确保表达清晰流畅。

예시: Yes, I think my writing changes as I gain more experience and knowledge. This helps me see things from a deeper and broader perspective than before.

제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，有重复和语法错误。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并避免重复。

예시: It depends on the situation. For taking lecture notes, I prefer typing because it's faster. However, when preparing for exams or trying to remember something, I prefer handwriting.

제안: 回答不够流畅，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议练习流利表达，使用准确的词汇描述频率和原因。

예시: I don't keep a diary regularly. I usually write in it only when special events happen, like attending memorable ceremonies or experiencing strong emotions.

제안: 回答较好，但有重复和轻微语法问题。建议避免重复，使用更丰富的词汇使表达更自然。

예시: I like to take photos to record my life because it's very convenient with smartphones. Photos and videos help me capture and remember beautiful moments.

× Yes, especially when I just doing my tutorial question, I have to write my calculation and the answer on the booklet or just on the tablet.

✓ Yes, especially when I am just doing my tutorial question, I have to write my calculation and the answer on the booklet or just on the tablet.

这里缺少助动词“am”，动词doing需要与主语I连用时用现在进行时态，结构为am doing。

× Most time I just do my assignment or the third question, but sometimes I also write some diary because it's a good way to memory your emotion at some special time.

✓ Most of the time I just do my assignments or the third question, but sometimes I also write a diary because it's a good way to remember your emotions at some special time.

“Most time”应为“Most of the time”，表示大多数时间；“assignment”应为复数“assignments”，因为通常有多个作业；“some diary”应为“a diary”，日记是可数名词；“memory”应为动词“remember”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，表示多种情感。

× Most time I just do my assignment or the third question, but sometimes I also write some diary because it's a good way to memory your emotion at some special time.

✓ Most of the time I just do my assignments or the third question, but sometimes I also write a diary because it's a good way to remember your emotions at some special time.

“memory”是名词，句中应使用动词“remember”来表达“记住”的意思。

× Most time I just do my assignment or the third question, but sometimes I also write some diary because it's a good way to memory your emotion at some special time.

✓ Most of the time I just do my assignments or the third question, but sometimes I also write a diary because it's a good way to remember my emotions at some special time.

这里“your emotion”应改为“my emotions”，因为说话者在表达自己的情感，代词应与主语一致。

× Yes, because nowadays I gain more experience and knowledge during my daily life so I'm sure that I can see things from a deeper and broader perspective than usually I used I do.

✓ Yes, because nowadays I gain more experience and knowledge during my daily life so I'm sure that I can see things from a deeper and broader perspective than I usually used to.

“usually I used I do”结构混乱，应改为“than I usually used to”，表示“比我通常所用的视角更深更广”。

× Yes, because nowadays I gain more experience and knowledge during my daily life so I'm sure that I can see things from a deeper and broader perspective than usually I used I do.

✓ Yes, because nowadays I gain more experience and knowledge during my daily life, so I'm sure that I can see things from a deeper and broader perspective than I usually used to.

句中“because”和“so”连用时应在“life”和“so”之间加逗号，且“than usually I used I do”结构不正确，应简化为“than I usually used to”。

× I think it depends, we'll just make some notes on the lectures.

✓ I think it depends, we'll just make some notes during the lectures.

“on the lectures”应改为“during the lectures”，表示在讲座期间做笔记，介词使用错误。

× I prefer typing because I think it is more quick for me and if I just prepare for my examination or want to remember something, I prefer writing writing it down.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it is quicker for me and if I just prepare for my examination or want to remember something, I prefer writing it down.

“more quick”应改为比较级“quicker”；“writing writing it down”重复，应删去一个“writing”。

× Uh, I think I'm not regularly, I just write some diary when some special things happen, for example, attending, umm, very memorable ceremony or there's something, something happened that really reflect my emotion.

✓ Uh, I think I don't write regularly, I just write some diary when some special things happen, for example, attending a very memorable ceremony or when something happens that really reflects my emotions.

“I'm not regularly”表达错误，应为“I don't write regularly”；“attending, umm, very memorable ceremony”缺少冠词，应为“attending a very memorable ceremony”；“there's something, something happened”结构混乱，应改为“when something happens”；“reflect”应与主语“something”一致，改为“reflects”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× For me, I just like to take photos. It's very, it's very convenient because nowadays you can take photos on your phones and it just captures beautiful moments in my life and even I can do some videos to remember some things.

✓ For me, I just like to take photos. It's very, very convenient because nowadays you can take photos with your phones and it just captures beautiful moments in my life and even I can make some videos to remember some things.

“take photos on your phones”应改为“take photos with your phones”，表示用手机拍照；“do some videos”应改为“make some videos”，表示制作视频。