Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Isku day inaad ka jawaabto su'aasha si cad oo kooban, adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow ku celcelinta erayada iyo khaladaadka naxwaha. Tusaale ahaan, sharaxaad kooban oo ku saabsan cimilada iyo xilliyada ayaa kaa caawin karta inaad jawaabtaada ka dhigto mid dabiici ah oo wax ku ool ah.

예시: The weather where I live changes a lot because we have four distinct seasons. For example, it can be quite cold in winter, but in February, the weather becomes very hot and dry. I enjoy the warm weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors.

제안: Isku day inaad si toos ah uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow erayada aan la fahmi karin iyo khaladaadka naxwaha. Isticmaal ereyo ku habboon si aad u muujiso doorashadaada iyo sababta.

예시: I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel warm and comfortable. For example, I enjoy drinking cold drinks like soda to refresh myself when it's hot.

제안: Isku day inaad si cad oo kooban uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow khaladaadka naxwaha iyo erayada aan la fahmi karin. Isticmaal ereyo ku habboon si aad u muujiso doorashadaada iyo sababta.

예시: I generally prefer dry weather because it makes me feel warm and comfortable. For example, I like to drink cold soda to refresh myself when the weather is dry and hot.

제안: Isku day inaad si toos ah oo nidaamsan uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow khaladaadka naxwaha iyo erayada aan la fahmi karin. Sharaxaad kooban oo ku saabsan waqtiga iyo inta jeer ee aad hubiso saadaasha cimilada ayaa kaa caawin karta.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast when I wake up to know what the weather will be like today. This helps me prepare, especially if it might rain.

제안: Isku day inaad si cad oo kooban uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow erayada aan la fahmi karin iyo jawaabaha aan dhameystirnayn. Isticmaal tusaalooyin ama faahfaahin si aad u muujiso fahamkaaga mowduuca.

예시: In my opinion, climate change has caused more extreme weather events in recent years, such as floods and droughts, which affect people's lives and the environment.

제안: Isku day inaad si cad oo kooban uga jawaabto su'aasha adigoo isticmaalaya weedho dhameystiran oo macno leh. Ka fogow ku celcelinta erayada iyo khaladaadka naxwaha. Sharaxaad kooban oo ku saabsan sababta aad u jeclaan lahayd inaad booqato magaalooyin leh cimilooyin kala duwan ayaa kaa caawin karta.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates to experience new weather conditions and enjoy my travel destination more.

× Actually the the weather where I live changes a lot because we have 4 distinct season seasons.

✓ Actually the weather where I live changes a lot because we have 4 distinct seasons.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to more than one season. Using the plural form correctly matches the quantity '4'.

× For example in the weather can be quite cold but the last cable of mods like February the weather becomes very hot and dry.

✓ For example, the weather can be quite cold, but in the last months like February, the weather becomes very hot and dry.

The sentence has incorrect word choices and missing prepositions. 'Cable of mods' is incorrect; it should be 'last months'. Also, 'in the' is needed before 'last months'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× I enjoy the warm weather because it allows.

✓ I enjoy the warm weather because it allows me to feel comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'allows'. Adding 'me to feel comfortable' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× It depending on the season and I in that time so so my prefer hot because you want to have feeling so warm or sweet.

✓ It depends on the season and how I feel at that time, so I prefer hot weather because I want to feel warm or sweet.

'It depending' should be 'It depends' to use the correct present tense verb form. Also, 'my prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Maybe you drink in hot drinks like. Soda and.

✓ Maybe I drink hot drinks like soda.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker. Also, 'in hot drinks' is incorrect; it should be 'drink hot drinks'.

× It depended on the system where I am at the time, but generally I prefer hot water weather because it makes me feel warm and comfortable.

✓ It depends on the season where I am at the time, but generally I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel warm and comfortable.

'It depended' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'It depends'. Also, 'system' is incorrect; it should be 'season'. 'Hot water weather' is incorrect; it should be 'hot weather'.

× I also enjoy drinking warm. Perfect. It's like soda to refresh myself in hot water.

✓ I also enjoy drinking warm drinks like soda to refresh myself in hot weather.

The sentence has fragmented parts and incorrect phrases. 'Warm. Perfect.' is unclear and should be combined. 'It's like soda' should be 'drinks like soda'. 'In hot water' is incorrect; it should be 'in hot weather'.

× Of all iPhone hot water more information than cold water.

✓ Overall, hot weather provides more comfort than cold weather.

The original sentence is unclear and contains unrelated words like 'iPhone'. It is corrected to a meaningful sentence related to weather.

× Mostly I when I wake up I check in for a weather forecasting to know today what's the weather and maybe it come rainfall.

✓ Mostly, when I wake up, I check the weather forecast to know what the weather will be today and if it might rain.

The sentence has incorrect word order and missing words. 'Check in for a weather forecasting' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather forecast'. 'Maybe it come rainfall' is incorrect; it should be 'if it might rain'.

× So I prepare to yes.

✓ So I prepare accordingly.

The phrase 'prepare to yes' is incorrect and incomplete. 'Prepare accordingly' is a clear and correct expression.

× My opinion effects of climate changes are happening may be may cause in like yeah.

✓ In my opinion, the effects of climate change are happening and may cause serious problems.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete and clear sentence expressing opinion.

× Yes, of course I I am trying to fix another country to weather or climate in in variety of my country and to enjoy my destination or yeah.

✓ Yes, of course, I am trying to visit another country with a different weather or climate from my country to enjoy my destination.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear phrases like 'fix another country to weather'. It is corrected for clarity and proper structure.